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Does this sentence make sense?

The archery lessons were held in a lovely fixture park....
here are my spelling words:
feature
creature
pitcher
lecturer
bleachers
archery
picturesque
preacher
fixture
puncture
leisure
pleasure
closure
fracture
moisture
catcher
seizure
natural

and here are the blank sentences:

1.) It is a great _____________ to sit on _____________ and watch a fine ____________ fling the ball accross home plate.

2.) The__________lessons were held in a lovely,________park.

those are the only two i need help on.Thanx!

Does this Sentence Make Sense?

You should probably say "with an exiguous amount of respect" because exiguous is more of a measurement...not an adjective.

But what is this for? If you're writing a thesis, this is very random and seems unorganized. Unfair prices, smoking, drinking, and lack of respect towards African Americans are all usually unrelated. If I turned a thesis like this in to my college professor it'd be shot down instantly.

Oh, and you shouldn't put the word "and" more than once in a sentence if avoidable, which it is in that sentence. If you're stuck on this thesis then you should replace the "and" between smoking and drinking with a comma.

---EDIT
Writing it "Alongwith smoking and drinking treating blacks exigously is wrong." makes even less sense than the sentence you had in the first place. It's not perfect at all!!

HOW DO YOU USE THIS WORD IN A SENTENCE? Does my sentence make sense?

Here is my sentence:

Investing your money into my movie remake of, “Romeo and Juliet,” would by foremost be a great choice.

Did I use foremost right? Please Help!!! Or does this sentence make more sense:

Investing your money into my movie remake of, "Romeo and Juliet," would foremost be the supreme choice that you will ever make.

Is my punctuation right? and does remake have a hyphen? Re-make? PLEASE PLEASE HELP!

Does the word 'ardor' make sense in this sentence?

While you can feel "ardor" for a lot of things, you don't "put your ardor" into anything. That's an awkward construction that simply isn't used.

The whole sentence is awkwardly written. I'd rewrite it as "I put my all into my entry-level job, in which I could effortlessly succeed."

However, even that's a problem. If you could "effortlessly" succeed at the job, why did you have to put so much into it? If you want to say that the job was easy for you to perform well, but you also loved it (that's what "ardor" is about -- love), then just say that.

Does this sentence make sense: “This might be helpful for you to understand the term 'rough'.”?

Original Question: Does this sentence make sense: “This might be helpful for you to understand the term 'rough'.”?Dear Hyung Woo,It’s a little awkward, so you might want to revise it to make it smoother:“This might be helpful for you to understand.”“It might be helpful for you to understand what the word ‘rough’ means.”Note: When you say, “This might be helful for you to understand,” adding anything else sounds awkward, which is why I deleted the last part of your sentence (“the term ‘rough’”) in my first revision.My second revision starts with “It” instead of “This” and uses “word” instead of “term” for “rough” since “term” is something that would be more technical or a phrase that includes more than one word. Merriam-Webster defines “term” as “a word or expression that has a precise meaning in some uses or is peculiar to a science, art, profession, or subject.”See Malcolm Goodson’s excellent edit that captures both parts of the sentence with some interesting tweaks.

How can I check to see if a sentence makes sense? Is there a website I can paste it into?

This isn’t a full solution to your problem, but perhaps it will help.Choose the part of the sentence that you’re not sure of. Copy and paste it into the Google search bar. Add quotation marks (inverted commas) around the phrase. Then, start the search.You may be able to recognize grammatically incorrect phrases by the relatively low number of results. Even better, if you can think of another way to express the same thought, search for that phrase in quotation marks, too. The phrase with more citations on Google is likely to be the correct one.

Is this a good topic sentence and does it make sense?

mostly. i would say ... explores THE ideas... how THEY REFLECT.
otherwise, sounds good. good luck!

Does this sentence make sense and have good grammar?

It made sense the first time. For your revision, try:

I am who I am because of my heritage and my God, and I am proud of what makes me, me, so no one will ever change that.

I removed the comma before "because." "Because of my heritage and my God" is a prepositional phrase. If you started with it, you would need a comma. I changed "and" to "so" because you want to show result rather than additional information. I added a comma after the first "me" because you would pause there when you spoke. Commas in writing show where pause would occur in speaking.

English (language): Does this sentence make sense in English? I took a semester off when I was a sophomore student.

It technically makes sense, and no one would misunderstand you, but it doesn't sound like something a native speaker would say. It sounds clunky. We would hardly ever -- if ever -- put the word "student" after a word like "freshman" or "sophomore." Allow me to offer these alternatives:I took a semester off (during) my sophomore year (of college). [Note: The "of college" is optional and just adds context in case it's not clear if you're talking about high school or college. The "during" is also optional. It's frequently left out in speech but is more likely to be used in written language.]I took a semester off as a sophomore (in college). [Ditto re: "in college".]I took a semester off when I was a sophomore (in college). [Again, ditto.]

English (language): Does this sentence make sense in English? My coworker wants to take my job.

Yes it does. Though I would rather write it quite differently:I work in an office and I'm the senior assistant of the boss. In the office, I am the person with the second highest rank; my boss being the first. Because of that, one of my coworkers is jealous of me and wants to take my place.

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