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Toy Story 2: What's the name of this song?

I was watching Toy Story 2 and I really liked one of the songs that played. I don't know the name of it, can anyone help?

The scene is where the old man, the toy fixer, comes to help Al from Al's Toy Barn fix up Woody. He is fixing the paint, the polish, and Woody's arm to make him good-looking enough for the museum in Japan. He is sewing him and all of that stuff, and while he is doing it, and cute little song is playing that I really like.

Does anyone know the name of this song or where I might be able to find out what it's called? Youtube links are appreciated(:

I've been told that my story writing is childish how do I fix it?

First of all, you switch between tenses many times throughout the excerpt. For example, in the very first line you use "asked", yet in the next sentence, you use "pulls". One is in the past tense, the other is in the present. Make up your mind on which tense you're going to use. So, in your story, if I used past tense, it would be: “Seth, are you okay?” Noah asked from the other room. Seth pulled his head up from the distant sound of his dad’s voice but immediately dropped his head back down and buried it further underneath his pillow.

Next, your quotation forms are incorrect. When you put something in quotations, followed by a variation of "he said", you do this: "I want an apple," he said. The "he" is not capitalized. If it is a question or an exclamation like: "What?" he exclaimed. It also should not be capitalized, but usually in that case, it sounds very choppy to put in a "he said" afterwards.

Your writing is just unrefined. There are many grammatical errors, which you should proofread right away. Most of your sentences are boring and casual, and not very exciting to read. Take out a thesaurus and give some of your words pizazz; you tend to use the same words over and over, which makes it harder to read. There are also many run-on sentences that don't make any sense.

And I also found it strange that you call his father "Noah". Your story is in the 3rd person limited, which means that though it is in 3rd person, you are only looking into one person's thoughts, in this case, Seth's. Seth wouldn't be thinking of his father as "Noah", he would be thinking "Dad".

My maple story keeps minimizing, how do i fix?

well its a labtop kinda old and freshly redone windows and works exactly as it should until i try to play maple story sometimes and i get to play it about half the time without doing anything. but then the other half i get some blue screen and it restarts my pc but a simple reinstall fixes that and a the other quarter of the time it keeps minimizing and it's not popups and no other programs r running beside my anti-virus and other basics and it lets me play half the time but wut could cause this and how would i fix the minimizing?

How do you define a user story for a small bug fix in Scrum?

In Scrum, you can define bugs however you please.It is important to note that user stories are not a requirement for defining requirements in a Scrum team.User stories have evolved as a “best practice” for the Scrum framework, but have actually originated in Extreme Programming (XP). The same goes for the common user story format of “As a, I want, So that”, which also originated from XP by a company called Connextra in 2001.Generally, you have two options to define a bug:If you are in the middle of a sprint/iteration and your bug is associated to a user story you haven’t completed, you should complete it as part of the user story. After this, update your definition of done and/or acceptance criteria of the user story to ensure that the user story and future user stories cannot be complete with bugs ‘left over’, which then creates unnecessary technical debt.If this is not the case, then the bug should become a new task / user story added to your next sprint/iteration. You can call it something simple like “CSS issue for X in IE8” and do not need to format it like a ‘normal’ user story, for reasons specified above (see example below).Example of a bug card in Blossom

How can i fix my screen resolution after closing "Maple Story"?

Here is an easier way I use all the time my resolution gets changed.
Once your resolution is changed go to the desktop (the background thing) and right click.
Then select personalize or NVidia control panel.
I choose NVidia control panel but if you don't have it than just click personalize.
Then you click on display settings.
Tadaaa!
Now you can change your resolution.

Not enough space on my disc for maple story! how do I fix it?

my computer says it has like 18 GB... but i don't think its true... my dad replaced my old local disc with a smaller one after it crashed. it is an IBM T41. Every time I try downloading Maple Story it says I dont have enough space in my local disc. I did a disc clean up but it didnt help. how can i solve this problem?

The story my resume tells is erratic. How do I fix the narrative so I can have a fresh career start in my mid-twenties?

I don't see why you need to "fix the narrative". I see this as 2012-2014 - retail and customer service roles, 2014-2015 - film production freelancer with a quasi-promotion to production manager. Its a good narrative. Make your resume crisp, talk about your organizational skills, computer skills, deep understanding of the film industry, willingness to hustle and your focus on achieving tangible goals. I have  a broader set of resume tips here that might be helpful. 7 Rules for Writing a Killer ResumeI think you have the potential to have a compelling resume for the job that you are seeking. Just spend time crafting it and proof reading it.

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