Can you describe an ugly character?
Her tiny, screwed up eyes were hidden beneath the deep folds of her skin. Her jaw jutted out at such an angle, it appeared to be about to break off. It looked as though her nose had been broken several times, and it was now wonkier than a helter skelter. The creases of her brow were so deep that I secretly suspected they were just flaps of skin, surely no-one could possibly be that hideous? But still, her needles klacked-klacked as her gnarled claws held onto them. Her hair grew in bunches. Greasy grey coils thinning and glistening in the dim light. And her smile! Oh my! It was a thing of nightmares. A row of glistening yellow teeth were encrusted in inky black plague* and raw, bleeding gums. Her tongue was as grotesque and warped as the rest of her; a shiny purple thing, which would not hesitate to lash out and hit you with a torrent of verbal abuse. It was horrendous. One minute, she would be gnawing on a chicken bone, and the next- BANG! Every fault you had. Anything. Anything at all. BOOM. AFTER MAGIC: Her skin was stretched and was clipped. It no longer sagged around her face. Her eyes appeared bigger, now that they were no longer half hidden. Her hair thickened and was washed and softened. Her Jaw pushed back and nose straightened and shrunk. Her hands were healed, the arthritis** finally gone. Her teeth were scrubbed and levelled out. Her gums were cleansed. Hope this helps, Sasori Girl :D *I don't know if this is the correct spelling for the word I meant (disease caused by bacteria in the mouth) **I don't know if this is the correct spelling for the word I meant (disease caused by lack of cartilage causing bones to rub against one another, often found in the elderly or pensioners)
How to describe a character in a story?
A good tip for describing characters is to picture the character in your mind and think about what you, personally, would first notice when you saw him or her. If your story is first person or you're describing how one character views another, imagine yourself in the viewers place. If you first notice numerous things, then so be it. Usually, though, you notice one feature more than others. For example, you may notice a cool t-shirt that he or she is wearing, noting that you have similar interests. Or you may notice that, wow, he or she has really unique eyes. You can focus on one attribute to begin with, and then shift to others later in the story. Another tip is to use metaphors or unique synonyms when describing features. Instead of saying "He has brown hair," you could say "His hair is rich coffee." (Cheesy, I know, but it was the first thing that came to mind.) This also allows you to describe other aspects of his or her features, as well. In this example, "rich coffee" makes you think of his hair as being brown, smooth, or extravagant. In other words, he has really nice hair! Finally, indirect characterization can be useful. This is where, instead of saying outright "the man is unhygienic," you imply that he is unhygienic by saying "The man had unkempt, shaggy hair that shined with grease. His face was scruffy, and I knew his breath would be pungent should I lean in just a bit closer." This is more lengthy and lyrical, but typically a bit harder to write. Notice how it also extended one particular feature into a longer, more descriptive paragraph. Note that this type of description is used more often to imply personality than features, but can be useful for both. As for when to stop, only you can be the judge. My best advice is to write what you feel works, and then return to edit it later. Hindsight is 20/20, after all. Don't be afraid to write too little, though. That can be fixed as well. Often times, if it is a recurring character, it is better for description to build over time anyway. It keeps the audience interested. Mostly, though, it is up to your own judgement. I hope this was helpful! Good luck with your story!
How to describe a character running?
The track blurred below me as i felt a surge of adrenaline. The steady thump of my footsteps echoed in my ears and I felt a bead of sweat roll down my forehead. The only things stopping me from victory was my physical limits and my competition. just think about the setting, the sights, the smells, the feeling of running, the sounds, the character's thought process, etc. best of luck KT
Describe the character of Jane Eyre?
Jane Eyre is orphaned as a baby. She is a plain-featured and reserved but talented, empathetic, hard-working, honest (not to say blunt), and passionate girl. Skilled at studying, drawing, and teaching, she works as a governess at Thornfield Manor and falls in love with her wealthy employer, Edward Rochester. But her strong sense of conscience does not permit her to become his mistress, and she does not return to him until his insane wife is dead and she herself has come into an inheritance.
How do I describe scenarios and characters?
Reading would be a good first step, fiction mainly, as introducing scenarios and characters is usually the first job of the author. I would take example from one of my favourite authors, J.R.R. Tolkien, he sets up the character and slowly branches off into different things. He was amazing at grouping things and coming back after what seemed to be long convoluted tangents. Still though normally I would just say plan a short draft and build up on certain points.I hope that was somewhat helpful.Declan.L.Kanes
How to describe a character running through the rain?
The small drops of water attacked my body as I ran across the field and towards the school. How could I have forgot my track stuff? Focusing on the building ahead of me i sprinted a bit quicker. My shoes pounded heavily across the ground causing to mud slash up my leg, and stain my new jeans. I took a deep breath reminding myself that it was my own stupidity that had put me in this situation. To busy yelling at myself I didn't notice that I was sliding on the mud until my butt hit the ground with a loud thud. Great, I told myself, just great.
How to describe a character waking up from a nightmare?
Panting heavily, sheets drenched with sweat, dazed, possibly dizzy if he/she sits up. Depending on if its morning or night, you can describe the room, ie "the brightly lit room seemed distant and vague" or "the moon's light streamed in the window giving the room an ominous feel."