Can you please review my fantasy story idea?
So, I'm just starting this story. It's not the best story, I know. Katherine is this 12 to 14 something year-old girl. She doesn't get any attention from her parents, since they have started Farm business to provide for Katherine. Before they started the business, they had plenty of time so they spent lots of time with Katherine's bigger brother Bentley, that is why they favor Bentley over Katherine. Katherine lives in this large home, very bored with life. So she spends her time dreaming about this fantasy world she has created. She spends more and more time there reaching up to 10 hours of her time just fantasizing about that world. One day, she wake up in this fantasy world. She doesn't understand at first, then she tells herself she is only dreaming. This fantasy world isn't what Katherine imagined it to be. In her fantasy world, there lies all the things she like, all the memories before her mother died and where she actually got some attention. But there, it's darker and it's a bit sadder. She soon comes across Hunter. Hunter guides Katherine in the fantasy world, he explains that this isn't a dream, it's real. They go through the journey to find an exit, and they soon realize that some good tings that Katherine has dreamed up has mixed up with nightmares and mutated or have become 'defects'. Throughout the journey, they get rid of all the mutants. After they have gotten rid of them, Katherine is amazed and mesmerized that everything she wanted has become real. She forgets her purpose for the journey to escape and keeps walking, not even noticing Hunter has been taken with the mutants. At the ending, they reveal that the mutants were not destroyed, they just ran away and Katherine may well be forever in the fantasy world. So, it's still a bit hazy, and it sucks. I just created it in ten hours time. So, hope you cope with me . Haha. Can you give me ideas on what to call the fantasy world as well? And also some ideas to improve the story. Thanks!
Short Story Help? With a mutant alligator.?
ditto hav n aliggator eat him and his partner gets revenge.. i say its pretty good but put some mystery to it and leave the person hanging @ the end. other then tht well done.
Ideas for post-apocalyptic story??!?
"Wow, I just need few ideas that I can work with. I did not ask people to write a story for me. Few simple ideas would not hurt anyone" It would hurt you. Listen to the answers telling you to write, and come up with ideas yourself.
Ideas for a Vampire/Werewolf Story?
Okay, so in my story there's a girl vampire, Meredith and the boy werewolf, Lewis. In the story werewolf's are suppose to hunt and kill vampire's. So Lewis always assumed that vampires were horrible creature's. Meredith hates that she is a vampire. She ran away from home when she was bitten. Meredith also has a human form during the day where she looks like a human. Then one day Lewis and Meredith meet and instantly fall in love. That's all I have so far and I need a big conflict during the story. So thanks for helping.
Fantasy/mystery type story ideas set in high school?
have you ever seen the film, kickass? ideas like that that are out of the blue but actually work. but not to be a film but a story. usually with like a romantic edge to it too. don't answer saying its plagiarism and stuff, just need random ideas because i'm all out right now... thank youu(:
I have this webcomic on the Internet and I need story ideas. The ones I see are for human stories, but this is a Kirby comic. What ideas do I use?
First, remember that Kirby was all about human stories. All of Kirby, all of his classic stories, the characters that have stood the test of time and still draw readers today, is about human stories.Part of Kirby's genius was to be able to take human stories, and mythic stories, put them in the language of contemporary issues and concerns, and then play the elements off of one another to create conflict, tension and drama.FANTASTIC FOUR is a family drama. But they have to save the world.All of the NEW GODS is about generational conflict and change. But one of those generations is cosmically fascist and wants to end all life in the Universe.THOR is about sibling rivalry. But the siblings are Thor and Loki.KAMANDI is a coming-of-age story. But the young man is the only human left in a shattered post-apocalyptic world ruled by mutant animals. DEVIL DINOSAUR is a boy-and-his-dog story. But the boy is a proto-human monkey-critter and the dog is a freakin' devil dinosaur!So take those human stories. Use them, because any story worth reading is really a human story. Just put them into a blender with science fiction, mythology and wild cosmic adventures. Give your characters human conflicts with one another and superhuman problems to solve -- and vice versa. Run with the tension between those two storytelling poles.Boom, you've just used real-world, ordinary-human story prompts to inform and expand your Kirby-esque stories. Or as the King might have written it: KRAKA-THOOM! WHEN COMES A NARRATIVE!
Dark Book Title Ideas?
I really want to write a Dark Modern Fantasy novel. But I am not very good at coming up with ideas. However, I have learned that I draw inspiration from titles. So, I am NOT asking for your ideas (I want to come up with my own), but could you suggest some dark title ideas that I may be able to draw inspiration from? Thanks in advance!