Is my SAP appeal letter good enough?
I am pleading to the committee to please consider my appeal and award me not only a second chance but a chance at living my dream of becoming a college graduate. This is not a letter I write lightly; it is with a heavy heart that I am seeking another opportunity. It is with an inspired and ready mind that I know what needs to and what will be done to continue on my path towards success. I cannot stress enough exactly what this means to me. My entire life rides on this decision, and I know that I will not disappoint OSU. I ask that you look at my successes and not at my failures as you render your decision. Included in this appeal are documents to support the following 1. The Meningitis Vaccine administered to me 2. Death Certificate for my Uncle ________ 3. Lease agreements for my parents who separated 4. Unemployment document for my mother for time frame. Additional attachments include. 1. Detailed outline of time management process to continue towards succ
Good enough resignation letter?
I am leaving one of my jobs because it is getting way too hard with school. Does this letter of resignation I wrote seem professional enough, while emphasizing it is due to school and I would like to come back? With this letter, I hereby submit my resignation from my position with Children’s Home Care Group as an on-call Home Care Assistant. Due to unforeseen schedule conflicts with my education, my last day will be January 10, 2007. I would like to sincerely thank everyone at Children’s Home Care Group who has made me feel so welcome and helped me learn the new skills that will greatly help me in my future. I have thoroughly enjoyed working with the company and the case I was assigned. I hope that in the future, should I have a more flexible school schedule, I can return to Children’s Home Care Group.
Is my appeal letter good enough?
I'd make it _much_ shorter and lose all the wangst about "cousin who's like my own brother." The problem with this is that it reads like "it wasn't my fault, poor little me." Point to your financial responsibilities for your family - now gone, since your dad has a new job. And be much more specific about these summer classes. Which courses will you be taking? Have you applied yet? Were you accepted? Similarly for your schedule change. "I plan to do classes x, y and z which is n credits, I feel this is a number I can cope with." You're being far too vague - this honestly sounds like "please let me stay because I don't want to be sent away from my friends." Changes in your life? Name them and say why they will help. There's an awful lot of waffle here and no substance. Give it substance.
Is this College Appeal letter good enough?
I'm not experienced in this area, but the letter sounds very good. I would make sure to send your new transcripts to the school. Also, make sure the letter is neatly typed and spell checked. I would also ask your parents to read it over for extra feedback. Good luck, I really hope you get in :) PS- here is an example of a letter of appeal (although the example is not appealing a rejection letter, it is a good example for a general idea) http://www.letterwritingguide.com/sampleappeal.htm
Is proposing to a girl through a letter good enough?
Please don't use a letter.... Though it might seem like a good idea at first as it seems very dramatic/romantic, but that's the way you see it in your head... Often when men put words on paper we tend to, give voice to our innermost feelings, however letters are open to interpretation, your words on paper may not have the intended impact... You might appear to be needy or too cheesy or too pushy, you can't afford that risk while asking a girl out, the best approach is that you man up and tell her out loud about how you feel, in the simplest manner possible, then throw in a few sweet words... Well, all of this advice changes as per circumstance... But one things for sure, while asking a girl out you need to come out as a strong male who has courage. Letters may not have the impact of a face to face proposal, in fact a bit edgy I would say...P.S. Letters are a great way to delight a girl who's already into you... However be careful if she isn't into you yet... Best ot luck...
Is this letter good enough to give to a princiable?
Your letter illustrates why Japan, Taiwan, the European Union and Burkina Faso are ahead of our society. That's humor! haha OTOH, since you cannot find the United States on the map, you probably have no clue what/where Burkina Faso is. You are in the 6th grade and still cannot pronounce nor spell the word "principal" correctly. "School teacher" is not capitalized. Think you are smart accusing the teacher of slander? Well the fact that you disagree with the teacher does not make it slander. BTW, if you are thinking of legal action bc of alleged slander, you must prove loss of income in slander cases. You should go over the letter with your parents. It is not the job of the Y/A audience to edit your letter. If you want us to work for you, you can put money in hand.
Is my query letter good enough to catch the eye of an agent?
196,000 words is waaaay too long. 120,000 is generally considered around the maximum wordcount for a debut writer. Anything more than that, and it isn't worth the investment. Also, YA generally involves characters which are 13 to 18. When it comes to a query letter, the usual wordcount to stick to is about 250. The goal is to write something short that swiftly captures the protagonist, conflict, stakes, genre, and tone. There are too many names in this query. We don't need to know the details of everyone in the main character's party. There's only enough room for the protagonist, and maybe two more. Once you started writing about "Four years prior the Angel Nestor, Lord of Elydria, tore his brother Seival apart ..." my eyes began to glaze over. Too many proper names. I also don't get a real sense of the character Penny. She's very passive and bland in this. She could be just about any twenty-year-old, whisked off on a magical journey. You write that she is key to a plot: how so? Make her involvement in the story clear. She sounds like she's just an incidental player, tagging along in what is supposedly her own story. There really isn't anything in this query which sets it apart from any other through the portal fantasy story with an evil overlord. If you've got something unique, it needs to be clear where you describe the story. Show don't tell in al that. If you're deconstructing tropes, it should be obvious and you shouldn't have to say so. I've heard of a great method for getting to the heart of a query. Focus your energies on these three questions: -Who is the protagonist and what do they want? -What obstacles stand in their way? -What will happen if they fail? I highly recommend going to the forum I'm linking to as a source and reading the critiques of queries there. Once you build up 50 posts, you can post your own for critique. However, I think you should probably consider the fact that you're probably going to need to edit the hell out of your manuscript to get it down to a lower wordcount.
Financial Aid Appeal Letter, Good Enough?
It's fine. Never too much information on an appeals letter. However this letter must be accompanied by documentation from the Doctor on hospital letterhead as well as pharmacy records. Remember the school really doesn't care, actually that want financial adi to be reinstated. They would much rather get their high tuition from the federal government than chase down the student. The government's check never bounces. However, the shool needs the proof backing up the situation in case they are audited by the government. Good Luck