How would I answer this college essay question?
Sounds like this is for a faith-based school. They basically want to know how your goals for growing stronger in your faith mesh with your academic, social and career goals for attending college. So for an outline, you need an intro paragraph with some kind of thesis statement. It could be something as simple as X University is the best school to meet both my faith and my collegiate goals. Next paragraph, talk about your faith and why you want a faith-based school. Next one, talk about what you want out of college. A specific kind of education? A certain program that they offer? Classmates and professors who share your faith? Maybe one paragraph for the academics and one for the social aspects. Then a concluding paragraph summing up and saying how the university is best for meeting your needs. When they say "intersection," they're hoping for something showing that your faith and your college dreams come together. So, for example, if you want to major in pyschology, you could say you want to counsel people using faith as part of the counseling. If you're majoring in business, you want to use Christian practices in your business dealings. If it's education, you want to provide a faith-based education. If you haven't yet decided on a major, just say that whatever you end up deciding, you want it to have a faith-based approach.
Can someone read my college essay?
I wrote the following essay for Liberty University and was wondering how can I improve it? The question they had was: How will your personal faith and beliefs contribute to Liberty’s mission to develop Christ-centered leaders 200-400 My essay I grew up in downtown D.C the only glimpse of religion I had was the Christ statue that stood on our TV stand. The man on it looked sad; it was probably because he had cuts and bruises on his hands. He wore a long dress, which draped down with a gorges royal red color. I admired the statue, it had complexity to it. My parents told me to respect the statue, and as far as I knew Christ was that: a statue. Molded from clay, hand painted, with a stamp on the bottom that read: Sagrado Corazón. Years passed and I finally met God. God made a miracle in my family. Not only, did he save my mom and sister, he saved me. He introduced me to Christ properly. He wasn’t a statue He was my savior that died 2,000 years ago just for me. After that I viewed the world differently, no longer am I the light under the cup. I am the light that shines bright, not afraid to shout the Lord’s name. I believe that God put me on this world to spread the love of Christ. To become a leader to those who seek freedom from the corruption of daily life. To influence others that a chaotic life can only be healed through Christ. I am God’s daughter and I am here to spread the love of Jesus Christ. I am still going to write more but was wondering how it is so far. Thank You so much :)
I Can't Write My College Essays... :(?
I keep on trying. It is almost like I have too many ideas or too few. My brother told me to make a list and know I have a list of like 30 things to write about. I've started like 5 or six times but every time I get too bored of the topic or I'm not sure if it exactly goes along with the prompt or whether or not the people will like reading it or think it is dumb or what. Or if they read something sad by me and are just like oh, whatever, we've read worse, get over it! I'm in desperate need of help, I've been working on this practically all day and haven't really gotten anywhere :/
I need help finishing my essay for my college english class?!?!?
Start your essay with a good introdution- something like "There are many advantages and disadvantages with being the youngest child in a family. In my essay, I will draw on both my experience and the experience of others, to help me come to a conclusion about what the positive aspects of being the youngest child in a family are." Then, use your own experiences to formulate your first paragraph, something personal like "In my experience, the advantages of being the youngest child is that you can get away with more and learning from your older siblings mistakes. The younger sibling is usually treated better than the older siblings, because the parents have had time to adjust to having children, and can develop the best child care stratagy. As well as this the youngest sibling isn't expected to physically do as much. This is because the older siblings are usually stronger, or cleverer (simply because they are older) and parents will choose the strongest child to mow the lawn, for example." Just to get you started, say if you need more :) Olly
How to introduce yourself when writing an essay about your life?
I've been amused by people that turn the basic format inside out. Imagine something like: John Smith was born sixteen years ago and this made a lot of people angry. Since then, many people in Smithtown have tried to correct this mistake, but he's managed to keep a step ahead of them, mostly by being an artful dodger as well as a ___________. He isn't the son of a sharecropper because his father never learned how to share. For the past five years he's been studying ________ which he'll never use and looking forward to becoming a ___________, if he can just find a way around the rules. Writing in the third person with tongue planted firmly in cheek can be a lot of fun. If you can. get a copy of Douglas Adams' 'Hitchhiker' series. He has a lot of fun at it and can inspire you.