What do you think about my rap lyrics?
English is not my first language but I used to read books in english last 2-3 years so I have managed to learn some. I'm writing lyrics because it helps me improve my english and I love doing it. I love rap too especially the Old School. Here's something I wanna talk about, No time for jokes,nor time to fool around, I'm serious,fast to confess cause I can't rest At night when I'm alone I feel depressed, Possessed, by this lady inside my chest, It's a mess,so I'm wondering what's next, It runs deep and feel it so vivid through my veins Feel free,got wings and broke my mind's chains Reason disappeared,I'm a fool,I act queer, Can't stand still,body's shaking, it can't be real Grab a beer,my soul's burning, I gotta chill, Wipe out the bottle's seal,it relaxes me a big deal My friends are talking,I'm choking,I can't hear em Can't heed,need to breathe, I must leave em ''Hold on,where are you going,what's wrong with you?'' ''I'm cool,gotta go home,got something to do!'' Thus I stepped out,turned around and Ciao! Thinking what is this all about, cause I can't follow What's happening?Why am I so tense? And suddenly I've seen it again,now it makes sense That smile,it was that smile that gave the spark The spark needed to ignite my premature heart, It's happening that thing of which the poets talk so loud Now I know what was all about,so here I go,I'm all out
What do you think of these rap lyrics?
Your lyrics are very eloquent. Sounds as if you are battling with a toxic virus of "hate/rage" and are recovering with strong immunity against future infections. Interpersonal boundaries are very important to recognize in order to avoid infections of any vulnerable emotions within the self and/or others. Take care!
Could you tell me what you think of my rap lyrics?
I write songs and most suck. The only way I know a song is good is if I play it, ask for no feedback, but receive positive feedback.I think you have articulated well a feeling that is very real to you. You make clever connections and use well thought out wording.If you are asking if they are cheesy, either someone put it in your head that they are, or you truly believe they are cheesy.If you believe in what you write, when you sing it, people will hear the difference between cheesy and real. If you took enough people from another dimension and had them read tupac, some of them would find it cheesy. However, the American public found the song Changes thought provoking in a positive way.The question to ask is not whether the lyrics are objectively cheesy or good or real etc.; rather, do they sound real out of your mouth.The bottom line is that you have to perform the song to know whether they feel cheesy or real. If your intuition feels favorably on the performance, then you've written good lyrics; and you shouldn't listen to what other people think.Learn how to believe in yourself, and go make make music.
What do you think of my lyrics ???
nice try since you seem not to understand when someone is sparing your feelings, you tried it sucks, find a new hobby.
What do you think of my grime/rap lyrics?
ok so these are my last grime lyrics, im moving into UK hip hop/rap, let me know what you think, CHORUS: did you ever know that i was road? did you ever know that i was cold? im sure you did not know that.. cause night to day is pen to pad X2 Verse 1: In just a 16, a sick teen, with a sick dream, a piff fiend, I spit lean, not big in the scence but no-body gets what K-I-DOUBLE D means, Like i can list teams that cant spit to many half-wits, who do i start with? So thats an 8 bar quick Fam, i've got hardest **** that aint on market! I dropped without a biro, attack of a five-o, so back down and lie low, and for all you know, bruvv, you dont wanna be clashing this sphyco (spelling ?) So you gotta change of heart, my bars are advanced, im mad with the bars! I'll do anything to re-arrange the past That's just a 16 claiming to be hard! CHORUS: did you ever know that i was road? did you ever know that i was cold? im sure you did not know that.. cause night to day is pen to pad X2 Verse 2: Gimme the beat man i'll eat it, Seek it, **** that, i'll beat it to death and i'll even eat the rest, till there is nothing left.. And you know i cant lie about that s**t cause when i'm on the beat with the bars are infested, And i've had enough of getting arrested, And in the grime scence i've been tested. [Goodbye] thats it, the beat is Kid D - Glide Away youtube it, and let me know if you think the lyrics are good? feedback maybe? thanks btw im still 13 lol going to be 14 next year
What do you think of my newest rap lyrics!?
They said they wanted me to come up with a rhyme or two. They said they wanted me to cleverly design it too. I said I'll see what I can do. Should be no problem since I stay strapped with lyrics like bamboo. A lyrical giant like a panda. Whack emcees get away I can't stand ya. Your words and flow so lame. How ya got famous is beyond me a damn shame. My skills can't be contained. Not even if you put me in a bottle of champagne. With the cork on. I know you thinking why they let this dork on. The mic he never lived thug life nor sold drugs. Plus his voice high pitched annoying like bugs. I'm talking gnats and mosquitoes. It's cause my style cool like Doritos. Ranch I'm cut from a different branch than the rest. When it comes to rhymes I deliver nothing less than the best.
What do you think of my newest rap lyrics!?
Is the curse of ham When opportunities knock To comfa sniff a lickle girls socks Make strange mixy baby dem When he babbled he was the best Like country bumkin incest Or some perverted ape tribe By impressioning the young first He then trophies his bride Anything to enter And so everything is in Speaks of black history Races and slaves When the world mirrors him So points the fingers Wearing his silly blingers Then being well affiliated Now devils idols masked as singers Uses words like new Cos he told him he can Reaps what he sows Casting stones Call Money's And Tag A Nee Sticks Sometimes in a hot pan. Ooops, seen claiming the stage With the Jinn Wearing slick shoes With the bow ties whom also let them in.
What do you think of my newest rap lyrics?
I'm trying to rest just not in peace. Same way I'm not trying to get shot in beefs. By peeps who wanna harm me. Try to stay armed and on alarm G. Is the advice my homie gave me. Even using these tactics doubt it'll save me. Too many folks want me murdered and buried. In enough beef to make a thousand burgers that's scary! So I try to put it outta mind. Although I'm running outta time. First sign of danger I'm pulling out a nine! To defend my life at any cost. So many loss theirs by half stepping plenty caught. Mad slugs to they necks. Trying to be thugs to the death. Bad idea like drugs for your health. Shrugs be my guest anyway. It could be my last breath any day. My life I'm trying to make the best of what's left of it. And just forget about the rest of it.
Do you like my rap lyrics?
I was getting ready to bash you with my hate towards people who claim to be 'G', but then I read the lyrics. Very original I must say, but I am not a music expert so my opinion has no value. Maybe if you made that into an actual song...
Lyrics of this rap?
These are what i heard on the video: The nuclear membrane and nucleus is visable, time to do the functions everyday is critical, the chromotine is present in the granual mass, if you didn't have interphase your body would crash. YEAAAH! Open ya eyes as the astrays appear , the sentrials move to the poles right here, the chromosones appear along thin thread, nuclear membrane leave as if they were dead, ma biological hommies AKA da spindle fibres, attack the chromosomes that look like spiders, the sentrials reach the poles of the cell, the nuclear membrane disapear into their shell, the chromotin pairs line up in a ROW, just like ma boys back pumpin' yo. The chromotones are now lined up with the equator, whilst the sentroneters split, CHICK-A-CHICK-A!! play haters, pin the bodels join each KRO-MA-TID, to the asser from the centrometer, Got dat kid? Anerpids with the chomotids to pull it apart, just like one Chuck Norris rips outcha heart, the spine of our estate were tuggin' 'n' pullin', the opposite pulse where they be goin', the nuclear membrane is backing up on the hood, rechin' a line in the chromosone just like they should, like ma homie and I do a neicioli to the brain of the cell, and they be springin up for show 'n' tell, the chromosones shrink down till they can barely be seen, they are the dencious acid yow!! And this is, mitosis. That is what i heard so there are all the lyrics for the whole song, Luke.