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I am writing a song that I have been working on for a year and I’m finally finished. Here are lyrics: the song is called “Sherona”. Lyrics: Do you remember our trip to California? Do you remember the sun daze wedding ring? On Sherona when we jumped when we sang sherona, when we drive, when we come now it’s 2014 time for Atlantic waterfall we are fruit on the grapevine because we are done with the wine in the end Sherona when we drive when we come Sherona when it’s time when you like Sherona!!!
What do you think these song lyrics mean?
I think, ultimately, it's about staying focused when loads of other things are happening around us to the point where it could, seemingly, drive us all mad.
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I wrote song lyrics for a song I’m writing, the name of the song is “Melissa’s parents”. Here are the lyrics: Melissa cries, Melissa fights for her life, she’s on the way to psycho with her dad, Melissa smokes, and then she’s broke she’s got no way of conformity, Melissa fights with her mom over the night but the right thing to do is fly a kite, Melissa’s parents, working day and night they come home and pray for Melissa to be okay, Melissa chokes, when she’s smokes shes on her way to recovery. Melissa writes, that she’s shy but the teacher still makes her present in front of the class, Melissa’s bass, where she learned in class won’t do her any good in this awful world, so she’s curls in a ball and makes her little brother fall, Melissa’s fine but she’s nine so why are Melissa’s parents a canine?
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The song name is "Chupee". Here are the lyrics: Four o'clock in the afternoon and your moms out there in the fair with her hair, just got it done, not a gun, her hair, Is that fair? 3'oclock after mid night and we see a fight between two people, after hours we fight for what's right you say we shouldn't go to the time after the days of our lives, it's time for the time of things to get it right I said yeah yeah it's time for the things of right, I said it. 8 AM and it's morning and Alana's gotta go to school, start up the car and drive to the school, the teacher comes out and talks to me about her grades she told me she's a gifted student yeah she is.
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I wrote a song, the name of the song is "It doesn't matter". Here are the lyrics: Hey baby I just want you to know i'm here for you, hey baby I just want you to know it doesn't matter where you are tonight, hear me out. It doesn't matter if your one or two, it doesn't matter if we dance the night away, it doesn't matter where you are tonight, it doesn't matter if you fly a kite, baby i'm telling you It doesn't matter oh yeah it doesn't matter It doesn't matter if you like rap or sap it only matters where you are tonight so baby come with me tonight It doesn't matter if you're one or two it only matters where the pride in you hides it only matters if we share a plight it only matters because the shining light
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I am writing a few songs, here is one from my album it's called "Better than ever". Here are the lyrics: No matter who you are, no matter where you stay, you'll be better off indeed. No matter what they say it's just a day away, forget what the dirty voices say, they are just decayed and you are who you are. The haters might say i'm a waiter but they are changers, their mom raised them to be baiters oh waiters? it's the little things in life that they say, my mama told me never to play pretend, never give in to surveillance, no matter what they say you'll be okay in my book.
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They are for a metalcore/melodic metal core song my band might work on. It's about finding solace within your home and the security about being alone. Its also about not needing others to help you when you are well enough to do it yourself. "Behind These Four Walls" Never did I think, That everything was about to close on me, That I could find some help, some closure, A place that I could call my own, I set a goal, To never ask for help, From you, Even when I’m left for dead, I will never rely on your defending, I will never ask for your protection, You still tell me “You need my help”, “You won’t make it without me”, I said thanks when I took those words, I put them in the ground, In the ground just like everything else, That slipped from your mind, I think I found some closure, I think I found security, I know now what I needed, I found this all behind these four walls, The walls to be alone, The walls I call my home,
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I've been writing songs, this one is called "Forever Shining" here are the lyrics: Do you shine? do you bright? do you far? where you are? where's your mom? where's your dad? come on over here and listen to the fad, did your friend? did your dad? did your sister? back then in the old days we said don't don't don't do do that because shining is for kids who said that? lets all adventure on the next high way, do you shine? do you far tell me where you really are? i'm a car your on mars now we're far, let's laugh at time, laugh at grace from where we are so let's just shine.
What do you think of these rap lyrics?
Your lyrics are very eloquent. Sounds as if you are battling with a toxic virus of "hate/rage" and are recovering with strong immunity against future infections. Interpersonal boundaries are very important to recognize in order to avoid infections of any vulnerable emotions within the self and/or others. Take care!