Art Project:Collaborate an artist and a philosopher HELP (Read)!?
Some artist: Barbara Kruger , Glenn Ligon, Cindy Sherman, Jenny Holzer, Guillermo Gomez Pena,Lorna sipson, kara walker, krysztof wodiczko,jeff koons, robert mapplethrope,maurizio cattelan,bill viola, shirin neshat, kehinde wiley, marina abramovic, alfredo jaar, inigo manglano ovalle, maya lin, janine atoni, julie mehretu, Do-Ho Suh, andres serrano, allan mccullom, chris burden, vito acconci, edouard kac, robert mapplethrope, damine hirst, chris offli PHILOSOPHERS:Hume, cole, Martin luther King, crito, socrates,spelman, aristotle, karl marx, heidegger, hooks, rawls, nietzche, plato.....etc My Job is to Collaborate one artist and a philosopher to create an artpiece WHAT SHOULD I CREATE???? i need some ideas, something creative that collaborates both of these peoples ideas into a whole new idea.. i have to be able tooutline the philosophical concept how the artist is intergrated into my piece I NEED AN IDEA!!!!!
Dose this sound like a 8th grade reserch paper it long sorry and is there any mistakes if so plz tell me?
In your opening paragraph, you have two sentence fragments and I am not sure what your thesis is. You need to develop a clearer topic sentence: "Telling how he affected us during and after the civil war. Also how he got involved in the military." This does not make sense. Also, you have lots of punctuation, grammar and spelling errors. You forgot to capitalize Grant's name, but you mistakenly capitalized Throat? It should be pall bearers, not Paul bearers... they were not carrying a guy named Paul. Your conclusion sentence is a run-on. All in all, this essay is a mess. You have a good start, but you need to fix all of the mistakes.