Does This Sound Like An Interesting Book?
I am rather shy about my writing. I have an idea for a novel that I want to post on Wattpad.com, but I've decided to get your opinions on the synopsis first. It is a Science Fiction/Adventure (There will be some action and probably a little romance, but not too much). I know that Dystopian science fiction novels are sort of overdone right now, but I want to write this because I genuinly enjoy writing dystopian books, not because of books like The Hunger Games. I appreciate construction critisism, but please don't be rude about it. Synopsis: Drea Ashings world is shattered when her sister, Elodie, is kidnapped after an attack that leaves her home in ruins. With little but her own life, Drea sets off on a journey through the ravaged wastelands left behind by the War to find her sister. Suddenly thrown into a lawless, ugly reality, perhaps the most surprising thing of all is what Drea learns about herself; she is as tough as nails, cold as ice and an unbeatable survivor. On a journey that started as a mission to save her sister, Drea will be given the chance to change her corrupt society. There is only one flaw; Drea isn't a hero. Thanks in advance <3 (To any of those interested in reading, it will be posted on my Wattpad account in a few days. My username is DreamingCorpse).
Does this sound like an interesting book?
I tried to answer this morning but was having technical troubles and then I was off to work with a busy busy day. They say the hardest part is coming up with a story idea and you have conquered that part and have come up with a very unique idea. I'll tell you somethin about me. I am a very “visual” reader and I love it when the author describes things to me. For example, the big guy that was banging around looking for her. What did he look like? How was he dressed, like, was his clothes frayed or ill fitting or was he a dapper dresser like a politician? It's your world and you paint the pictures for us to see when we read them. I bet you have a picture of that guy in your head so tell us. You can make it anything you want. I applaud you aspiring writer and I encourage you on your journey. I hope to see your story in print!
Which sounds more interesting, a book about gangs or fantasy (ex: magic, vampires, witches)? I have an idea for a Wattpad book that I could take into two very different directions. It’s only for Wattpad which is where the gang cliche comes in.
Personally, I’d have to go with fantasy. I love reading an author’s personal take on how a superhuman acts, their feelings, etc. And as a writer myself, I’d have a lot more fun writing that, too.However, Wattpad is very stat-oriented. I haven’t been on there in a while, so the gang cliché is news to me. It depends on whether you’re writing for your own pleasure, or the general audience’s interest. If gang oriented stories is the current go-to for most readers, that’s definitely an important factor to consider.This got a little sidetracked, but to answer your question: fantasty. Whatever path you choose to go on, let me know. I’d love to read it :)
How can I make books sound interesting to kids?
No, don’t explain it to them, CONTINUE READING TO THEM. Parents do this when they want kids to love reading and it always works. Early grade or kindergarten teachers who succeed do this a great deal.This should be done from before the kids can even read. This was common when I was growing up before any internet. People were a lot smarter than due to a lifetime of reading. The internet contains lots of knowledge, but most of it is opinion and much of it is misinformation.Today, the average kid is an expert at computer technology, far better than an old guy like me will ever be. However, they often know very little about science, history, geography, news events and how to tell what’s true and what isn’t. Try getting that from Facebook and other social media!So read to your child from an early age and continue until they’re reading on their own and asking for new books. They’ll still grow up knowing technology, but they’ll also grow up in a world they understand and can succeed in as well.
How to make my book plot sound less like the Hunger Games?
I haven't ever read the Hunger Games, but I came up with an idea the other day for a book plot and I wanted to write it, but a few of my friends (and people on here) have said that it's kind of similar. I've ordered the book so I can read it and see what I can change, but it hasn't arrived yet. Anyway, here's my idea (and this is the really short version)- Criminals, after being found guilty for serious crimes, have the opportunity to choose between life imprisonment in Gohran City, a nationwide prison that's inescapable and renowned for being a really horrible place, or taking part in the Gohran Island Trials. The Trials are basically a race for survival; an organization that watches over the trials (calling them the 'controllers' for now, because I haven't decided on a name yet) can control everything, and they try to kill prisoners off. They do this by causing 'natural' disasters, setting traps, etc. There are only two rules - you are not allowed to kill your competitors, and the last one standing is set free to return to their normal life. Half way through, two of the competitors start to kill off other prisoners to give them a better change of winning. Normally they would be taken out of the Trial straight away and placed into Gohran City, but the 'controllers' decide that it just makes it more interesting. The other competitors don't know about this, and still think they're not allowed to kill. The main storyline is about the main character and his fight for survival against the traps that the controllers have set, and against the other two competitors who are trying to kill off everyone else. Like I said, I've never read the Hunger Games. I don't know what happens in it. So if you're gonna answer saying "this sound like hunger games!" then don't haha. I just need ideas about how to make it different enough that it won't be seen to be copying it! Thanks for any help!
How do I make my voice more interesting?
It may not be your voice, but what you are saying. I would suggest watching movies and learning from charismatic, likable people in them. The easiest way to make your voice work right is to smile and feign some enthusiasm for whatever you're saying. It will likely make you have the correct tone during the story. You can also add color to the way you tell the story with needless expressions. They don't add anything to the content, but they help shape the listening experience. These can be things like, "Yeah!" after something unbelievable, as though you're answering the question of "Really?" in everyone's mind. Or rhetorical questions like "And guess what happened next? The fly landed right in her soup!" Because these things are so pointless, it's hard for me to use them naturally. But you can find them by watching others speak, including many characters in film. They seem to help in oral storytelling. You could probably also get some tips watching stand-up comedians. They are essentially storytellers for a living.Analogies and flowery language also helps. Keep away from cliches, though. People's brains are desensitized to them. Make up your own analgies and figures of speech that work for you. If you can't think of these on the fly, plan them out ahead of time for regular things. Like if you need to describe something is scary, you can think up something such as "It was like a tarantula jumped inside my heart!" or whatever. If something was tasty, if someone was nice, or rude....just think of common adjectives and come up with interesting language to get the point across.Pay attention to your listeners and keep them involved. You can ask them questions along the way and be a good listener when they're talking.
What can I add to my novel to make it more interesting for readers?
A2APlenty of thing, depending on the reader. Your question sounds familiar to me, but I think the real question lies deeper:There's an ongoing dilemma for us, the ones who are trying to achieve a high standard with our writing - or any creative endeavour. And that dilemma is that we want to push ourselves up to the level of perfection and that is plain impossible. We use dissatisfaction as propulsion and risk to become forever stressed out and unhappy with our results. Perfeccionism is a double-edged sword.You want to entertain your readers and in your own words (mine too, as I struggle with my current writing), you "want to write this book right". Write it right is unachieavable, I'm sorry to say that. I found out that rewriting can go on forever until you step on the breaks if you are in this mindset. The result still appears unsatisfactory and another load of stress is discharged.That's why I believe the high standards should always be put into the present moment; meaning, the sentences, the lines, the act of waking up and deciding to focus on you writing. The more you put in, the more you get out. That means that the inspiration that your book will provide is totally out of your control. All you can do is to put energy and focus and honesty on your work. It won't come out just right, but all the energy will be there.You already know what you enjoy in books: the characters, the prose, the story, etc.. What diferentiates one from another is given before you sit down and write it.
How would you described the sound of pages flipping in a textbook caused by wind?
I'm writing an eerie scene where the wind causes the pages in a text book to be quickly flipped from one side to the next. For whatever reason I'm having a really hard time with how to describe this. I've been flipping pages back and forth, trying to figure out how I would describe the sound and I've come up with nothing. Please help.
Have you ever bought a book with no real intent on reading it?
Yeah. Especially at used book stores, I’ll notice books that sound cool on the blurb, and just to have stuff on my shelves I’ll get them. Go back to my shelves now, though, and I’m more likely to reread one of my favorites instead of trying one of the new ones. Sometimes it’s because the blurb made the book sound more interesting than the book actually is. One time I got a book that sounded like a really cool YA novel, but later I had one of my friends count the number of times the book said “f*ck” and she got to 27 in just the first three pages. We were in 6th grade at the time, but even now I consider that to be way too much.So, yeah, I’d say buying books you never read is normal.