Can I please have your feedback on my short story?
It's a prologue and 3 chapters long and its finished. You can read the whole thing here: http://worthyofpublishing.com/book.asp?book_ID=808 If you have an account there then I'd really appreciate it if you commented there. Otherwise, here's fine. It's actually the first short story I've written and completed that's not for school that's why I need some feedback and constructive criticism. Thnx!
Could someone give me an apt and witty title for my short story on a pollutant and review it to help me refine it?
Plight of the DefendersThe Warriors/Defenders/Protectors of EarthThe Stratospheric DefendersThe Stratospheric SagaThe Stratospheric WarsThe Blue(Ozone's color) WarriorsThe Ultra-Violet Wars