Can you help me edit my poem?
I wrote this poem about the boy I like (its kind of more like love) but anyway can you help me edit it. It's difficult for me to change anything about it for some reason. If you can't think of any changes just comment on it! I like harsh bit constructive criticism but compliments are always accepted too... Thanks I saw you in my dreams last night But it was awkward like real life. We often don't know what to say So we just look into each others eyes But quickly look away For there's always a distractions And There's no purpose in looking if theirs nothing to see. But it's not the lines or colors Its more the feeling of it all Or something else But your eyes burn so bright I regret looking away They get stuck inside my head like a song Turns my letters to scribble My words to nonsense It makes me a fool to think You ever liked me Or That you could make this noise inside my head stop
Can you help me edit my Macbeth paper?
THE FIRST PARAGRAPH CHANGE: "while representing love it can also hold the secrets and darker side of a person" TO: "While representing love, it can also hold the secrets and darker sides of a person" IN THE SECOND PARAGRAPH, In the last sentence of the 2nd paragraph, you should remove the second comma before the 'and' ALL IN ALL: I have noticed that you have alot of '/' that I don't understnad of, so you might wanna prof read ur essay! But I really like ur essay its really good!
Can you help me edit and make my book better?
If you want free editing then find beta partners. A beta partner is someone who writes that you give notes on their book and they give notes on yours. This way it is an equal back and forth. Most writers have multiple beta partners to give different viewpoints. If you plan to self publish then you should still pay a professional editor to look at your work.I used to beta for other writers, then I realized I liked editing more than writing and did so much more for each book than the average beta. This is how I realized my career of choice. I will still beta for close friends or family, but any other editing I do is for a publisher or freelance for a fee.
Would you help me edit my college essay?
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Can you help me find out what audio editing app this is? (screenshots in the description)
adobe audition, maybe?pro tools is much more common though===Your answer needs editing to be more helpfulProvide more explanation why the answer is correctAdd a bio that shows experience or expertise in the topicInclude links to relevant sourcesUse correct spelling and grammar and clear formattingLearn more about what a helpful answer looks like
Would you help me with my poem?
Here it is in answer form:--------------------------I am losing it, in sightStarting narrow, opening brightIt is not heavy, nor lightCan't measure it, it's delightIt reflects, like a mirror, in partYet, open ended, resembling artIt surrounds, like a circle, no end or startCan't understand it, it's in the heartThe only thing in the world without a blurSelf demonstrating the literacy of pureIt pauses my pain, as a natural cureCan't doubt it, it's sureI won't help it, or give assistanceRather sacrifice all, worth more than existenceIt puts me to extremes, from mild to wildCan't hold it back, as I'm standing by the bed, of my sleeping child--------------------------What I see is rhymed unfooted verse; "unfooted" means that there isn't a regular pattern of stressed and unstressed syllables; as you mature as a poet you may find that easier and easier to accomplish.Your rhymes are well-chosen; Great! "in the literacy of pure" is a little awkwardly reached, but it's mysterious enough to count as a good line.Winding up, the final line makes all the mysteries vanish; this also is very good.And finally, the feeling, the emotion is clear, believable, and well rendered.
Can you help me edit my (short) essay? for college?
Yes, it needs editing as follows. To the Admissions Committee: My (spell out AP) economics teacher once told me that competition is essential for any capitalistic country: it can stimulate the economy, lower prices, or boost efficiency. Upon further reflection, I now realize that the world of economics is not the only place where one can find competition. This also applies to high schools and colleges. I have come to the realization that the most valuable asset one can have is an education. Delete paragraph two. My parents and I moved to China for my first two years of high school; however, these years were not recognized by my New Jersey high school so I made up these credits. Through hard work and a heavier class schedule, I am now able to graduate on time with my classmates. I am very passionate about learning and enjoy challenges. Paragraph 3: Note to you: Just leave out the stuff about your GPA, and that you will attend their school if you are accepted. Instead, write something to the effect that: "...For many reasons, some of which I have mentioned above, I am applying to your institution of higher learning in the hope of fulfilling my potential." Thank you in advance for your time and efforts on my behalf. Signature Print or type name