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Could you help check if there's any grammatical error in this sentence, "It did not mean that they understood God, much less followed God’s will"?

As a free-standing sentence, this is grammatically perfect (and I can certainly imagine contexts in which it would be a deeply meaningful analysis).If there is a grammatical problem (the use of “it” rather than “these,” for example), it will be because of how this sentence relates to the one that precedes it.Edit: I'm sorry, but somehow I missed your more specific question the first time around. The reason we use “followed” is to maintain a parallel verb form with “understood.” You can think of this as the joining of two sentences: “It did not mean that they understood God. It did not even mean that they followed God’s will.” → “It did not mean that they understood God, much less [that they] followed God’s will.”Using a different sentence completely as another example of parallel verb forms: “We were swimming, playing, laughing and generally having a good time but that didn’t mean we weren't paying attention, much less noticing the dark storm clouds.” You could change the verb form for the last two, but those two would have to remain equivalent: “… but that didn't mean we had forgotten where we were, much less [had] ignored the No Trespassing sign.”I hope that's helpful.

Could you please check any grammatical errors in these sentences?

Dear sir:

Many thanks for speaking with me on the phone yesterday evening. I also appreciate your taking the time, particularly during the weekend, to read and consider my e-mail.

In light of our conversation, I want to inform you about some new developments that have arisen since our discussion. Please let me know if there is a convenient time to speak with you again, or if you would rather I explain in an e-mail.

Sincerely yours,
(signed) [your name]

Grammar sentence errors help?

help me with these following sentences tell me what part is wrong and what i should fix it with..


1) If you were to work at least four hours a day on the project, we would complete it in a shorter time, and with less problems.
2) The manager tried hard to effect a change in company policy, but the owner who steadfastly refused to compromise, overruled him on every point.
3) My uncle, who was on vacation, along with my two cousins and I , went fishing down by the river.
4) Hopefully, we will be able to complete the building before the rainy season sets in.
5) You would have to choose her, if you are looking for the best athlete to represent the school.
6) Her avaricious relatives assembled at the lawyer's office to head the reading of Jemima's will.
7) He was not merely expected to contribute funs to the project, but to work as hard as the other patrons.
8) None of us knows what the outcome of the battle between the coordinator and us will be.

Is there an app to evaluate if a sentence is grammatically correct or not?

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Could you please check if there is any grammatical errors in this sentence?

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I hereby inform you that while waiting for confirmation from the Hotel A about the possibility of 6 days reservation for His Excellency, in order to attend the SAT Conference in November 8th to 14th, 2007, in a backup, we have also reserved hotel accomodation during those period for His Excellency with the Hotel B, of which the room types and rates are attached.

Help me finding error in this sentence?

4.

Similar songs exist among widely seperated people?

You don't really need to specify that they are WIDELY seperated.

The sentance should be:

Although no country has exactly the same folk music like that of any other, it is significant that similar songs exist among seperated people.

that is the only thing I can think of that is wrong and fits within the confines of the assignment.

IDEALY you would say "same folk music AS any other", but since they don't give you the option of that, and "music like of" or "music that of" don't make sense, I deduce that it is #4 that is wrong.

That is a very terrible sentance as it is, even when corrected.

ADD: If you are allowed to CHANGE the mistake, I would suggest number 2, rather than 4. I would go with "same folk music as that of any other..."

So if you are allowed to correct the mistake, keep 4 and change 2. If it's just something that has to be removed and you aren't allowed to substitute a new word, then keep 2 and remove 4.

What is wrong with this sentence? There can be more than one error & yes there is a mistake somewhere.?

The period before the question mark

Reword this sentence?

It's obvious that you've thought over this sentence. You've done well with the vocabulary. (I don't think I've seen "repercussions" in a long time, but it was used properly. ) As far as rewording it, consider:

Decisions, especially those made by teenagers, can have many negitive repercussions, including a loss of innocence.

It's not very different from your original statement, but it eliminates the akwardness from your first non-essential clause. With the clause removed, your original statement read:

"Decisions made can have many negitive repercussions, including a loss of innocence."

The "made" just didn't flow well.

How do I revise the following sentences to eliminate errors in grammar and usage?

1. 60% of the students surveyed worked more than 20 hours a week.
2. Most people are promoted to a permanent assignment within six months but some remain in the training program for up to twelve months (not completely sure here).
3. a) The presently suggested solutions are not adequate or b) The presently suggested solultion is not adequate (if there's only one solution suggested).
4. While typing and editing, sometimes the text may not appear correctly.
5. The manager asked all employees to cut back on energy waste.
6. The benefits of an online catalog are: 1) Records will be kept up-to-date, 2) Catalog system is accessible from any networked campus terminal, 3) The main catalog and the departmental and branch libraries' catalogs are consolidated, 4) Cost savings.
7. Banking services available include automatic withdrawal of car and mortgage/rent payments and direct deposit of paychecks (not totally sure).
8. Business administration intrigued me as a freshman.
9. Thank you for helping Joanne Jackson and myself.
10. From my business experience, I have learned that good communication among people and departments is essential in running a successful corporation (use "is" because communication is your subject (what's important), not people or departments, and communication is singular). Or, I have learned from my business experience that good communication among people and departments is essential in running a successful corporation.

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