Please correct this text in English?
Can you correct the grammatical mistake of this text? Please Do you think young people are more or less fit than 50 years ago? I believe young people are more fit than 50 years ago. First of all, nowadays young people are more knowledgeable so they care about their health more than before. With the invention of internet and publishing many books about healthy foods and diet people are aware that they should eat nutrition foods instead of high calorie foods. Many young people even have dietitians and with their advice they can have healthier diet. Most importantly, these days we have more sport clubs and gyms than before and most of people exercise at least one or two days per week. Lastly, young people care about their looks and appearance more than before. In 20 century, young people try to look like celebrities and wear fashionable cloths so they try their best to keep themselves fit.
Is there any site where I can get correction of my English writing from natives?
What's the best website where I can find native English users willing to correct my writing?I can't answer this question, but it has been asked before in different forms on Quora. Here are a few of the topics where you can find answers:Is there any place I can find a native American English speaker who would be willing to correct my English writing stylistically?Is there any site where I can get correction of my English writing from natives?What are the best websites with English native speakers to find a pen-friend to practice my English?I want to start practicing English writing. Where can I check my writings for correctness?What are the best ways to find native English speakers interested in communicating with students to improve their English as a foreign languag...
Is this correct english? "i wanna only be with you"?
No. The sentence should be: I want only to be with you.
Can anybody help me for correcting my english?
English is not my mother language. I will send this email to a professor, so I need correction of the text. Can anyone help and correct my mistakes? Here is the email: I am a highly motivated engineer who is searching for a PhD-position in fields robotics and machine learning. I completed my bachelor and master degree both in electronics and telecommunication engineering in RWTH Aachen University, one of the leading technical universities in Germany. During my study as a foreign student in Germany, I was supported by DAAD-Scholarship because of my high Abitur score in Turkey. During my bachelor thesis, I worked on medical imaging. The topic of my master thesis was noise cancellation in audio signals. After finishing my master thesis, I worked for one year on an EU-Project, namely Camomile (Collobarative Annotation of Multimedia, Multilingual and Multimodal Video Signals). I have a lot of theoretical and practical experiences in audio, image and video signal processing. Programming is one of my hobbies since more than 10 years. I have a lot of programming experiences in various languages, especially in C++ and Matlab. In my opinion, robotic is the most interesting research field of science and has been fascinating the humanity since many decades. I am deeply fascinated by the fact that future robots will have more much more intelligence than robots today and will be able to make decisions and to act in unstructured environments. I would like to ask you for a PhD position at your laba nd am sending my CV in the attachment.
Could you correct this text please?
Hi, I'm an Italian student and I wrote and essay in English. Could you correct it grammatically please? 1) The typical subject of the sonnet is love in all its declinations, which are the satified love, the pursuit of love and the unsatified love. As a matter of fact, a constant in this theme is the fact that the love is always unsatified, since the lady couldn’t return the poet’s love. 2) The Elizabethan sonneteers were considered masters of rhetorics since they showed their ability in using several figures of speech in their essays. One of these was the conceit which were a poetic image which gave depth to an idea. It comes from that stilistic elaboration that the poetry wasn’t accessible by every single type of public but it was reserved to an intellectual elite. 3) According to Sidney and Spenser the poetry had the primary purpose of giving an insight of the court and its religious and moral identity. In fact they tried to combine the traditional Renaissance values with their Protestant beliefs. 4) After having married Elizabeth Boyle Sidney tried to write down his love in a collection of sonnets, Amoretti. In his praise to her, he considered the physical beauty as a reflection of the spiritual one. 5) The Shakespeare’s written tradition could be divided in two essential parts. The first one is dedicated to the fair youth, who has been identified as his patron, the Earl of Southampton. The second one is dedicated to the dark lady who, in spite of her loss of physical attraction, which seemed to not be corresponding to the Renaissance standards, was still loved by the poet. 6) Shall I compare thee by William Shakespeare, which belongs to the fair youth part of the collection, has as main theme the temporariness of the beauty. The poet compares his beloved to a summer’s day, saying that he prefers his beloved since a summer’s day is always shaked by the ‘rough winds’ and burned by the’eye of heaven’. Furthermore he says that every single beauty is doomed to finish. The sonnet is written in decasyllables with monosyllabic words, which give a regular rhythm.
Can someone correct this beginning English text for me?
Back in the old days, I think people were more polite than they are now. You had to respect everyone who was older than you were. Of course, there are still people doing that, but some of them don’t even know what the meaning of the word ‘respect’ is. Maybe it has something to do with technology; there weren't smartphones back then. If you didn’t know something about your homework, you couldn’t [definitely delete "easily"; you couldn't search for it at all] search for it on the internet as we can now. You’d have to look for [what is "it"? Restate noun] in a book, and sometimes it wouldn’t be in the book so you’d have to go to the library or just figure it out for yourself. I think that’s why there was more discipline then than there is now. Communication was better too, in my opinion. Families were downstairs in the living room, talking and laughing with each other, unlike now, where all family members are sitting on the couch and no one says anything. Instead, you see the lights of their smartphones reflecting on their faces.
Can someone help me to correct a paragraph of English text (200 words)?
I guess that you will find this tool quite helpful: Correct This Paragraph For MeIt is a free online software that helps you to detect any kind of mistakes that one can make, including:grammar;punctuation;spelling;sentence structure;style and enhancement.And it is really simple to use: just insert your text and get the instant result:However, I do understand that tools don’t get all kind of mistakes and with some, you will need a really qualified person. And I guess that looking for that person on Quora may be successful if you’re lucky enough, but hiring a good proofreader is actually a lot easier way.But I hope that this answer will help you a bit!
Could you correct this text for me, please?
There's kind of an issue, here: we wouldn't use 'fall down' unless we actually hit the ground. What you are describing is a disqualification. And using that word, your ending no longer works, it would read 'I've disqualified twice now, and I think I'll disqualify many times, in the course of my life.' You could use the word 'fail' instead, since you fail if you are disqualified. I've used that word in the version below, hope you like it. I've broken it up into paragraphs in the English style. Title:Failing, and trying again... ''Mike Disqualified": This was a sentence written in the game result when I was in the 8th grade. I participated in 110 meters hurdles in at Sendai junior high school track and field competition, the competion we call Chusotai. But I failed when I was hurdling; I stepped in the next lane, and was disqualified. That was my first hurdling failure. Time passed, and winter practice started. Winter training is very hard because we practice so much, but it gave me a chance to improve my hurdling. Winter practice ended with the spring, and I participated in springtime game in Iwate prefecture. I felt I was in good physical shape, and I came in first. Then Chusotai season came. Chusotai is most important of all the games. There are 4 chusotai, the first is for the city, the competition where I failed to finish last year. I finished third, in tough competion, and became uneasy. But my coach, Mr.Sato, said to me ''Relax, you’ve trained hard, you're ready."My uneasiness began to fade. Prefecture chusotai came. The head wind was very strong at that time, which made it extra hard for me because I'm short. I jumped the gun in the final because I didn’t keep my cool, and my uneasiness came back. Then I remembered the word ''Relax, you’ve trained hard, you're ready". And, the race started. The athlete next to me was the fastest hurdler in Miyagi, and he fell down! Sadly, it messed up my concentration, and I failed for the second time. But I didn’t give up. I qualified for the Tohoku chusotai because I was fourth. I got 4th prize eight months after my first failure. I've failed twice now, and I'm sure it will happen again in the course of my life. But I'll get back up and try again, thanks in part to the lessons learned and the strength I've gained practicing track and field.
Is there anybody on Quora with good English who could correct a text for me?
You are asking someone to volunteer for something with no idea what they're getting into. Does that strike you as reasonable? What exactly do you mean by “a text,” and how long is it? How hard have you tried scrubbing it yourself?