This is not a proper logo. This is a collection of puzzling design choices which make it difficult to read your name and even harder to remember it.Why did you choose to run all the words together? What made you decide to use all capital letters for "ITS"? What are you trying to accomplish by setting "ITSMy" in red and "Part" in black? All of these design choices make it hard to read your logo as "It's My Part".Why did you include the word "NEWS"? Why did you include "JOIN THE DEBATE"? (What are we supposed to debate? And how?) These elements create visual clutter and do not contribute anything useful.Why is there more clear space on the right of "ITSMyPart" than on the left? Why is "JOIN THE DEBATE" so poorly centered in the gray box? Why is the "y" in "My" touching the gray bar, but none of the tops of the letters touch the black lines?Why did you set "JOIN THE DEBATE" in all capital letters reversed out of a light gray background? If you want people to read it, why did you make that so difficult to read?User-10428656683422367264 is correct: There is nothing worth keeping here. Start over. The first step should be hiring a designer.Thanks for the A2A, and good luck with your site.
I see you are probably young, and just getting started expressing yourself in music. Can I ask you a question first? Is this music on paper so it can be repeated or performed by other people, or are you just improvising and overdubbing?Now consider you’re hearing this from a traditional musician ( certainly not exclusively classical, but still traditional , I like jazz, the Beatles, Michael Jackson, most classical up until 1920 ).I found your compositions fairly minimalist in content; that's what some people want. Repeating short chord change phrases mixing with a variety of accompanying stuff. Or a little repeating melody riff with other stuff. I hear you expressing yourself with sound, but not with any of the 'language' elements traditionally belonging to music, except that you do have a steady pulse. You have no tonalty, no scales, no structure to your chord changes, no beautiful melodies, no long musical phrases; a lot of repetition of a simple idea in a number of ways.If you like expressing yourself like this then my recommendation would be to learn about 'tonality' and see if you like doing things with tonal sounds. And see if you can write a singable song of maybe 16 measures. Lengthen your musical thinking, rather than repeating a short idea over and over.Just some ideas.
Advice/feedback on my art?
that is not undesirable... that is in basic terms slightly flat. nonetheless existence's executed at school are not my favourite, merely as a results of fact they are so random and that they do no longer possibly tell a narrative and there is not any concentration. there is not any longer fairly some "popping out" - there are no longer any very dark spots or very gentle spots that grab my interest - that is all merely very gray. There are some variety inconsistencies. The bottles and the glass are slightly lopsided... which could look cool if that is executed on purpose, however the varieties are not exaggerated sufficient to look like it replaced into executed on purpose, so it merely seems asymmetrical, like a mistake. that is sweet-searching for a drawing classification exercising, besides the indisputable fact that that is not any masterpiece.
I’m sorry, but this is really terrible."Amazing Web Design World"What are you trying to say with this? Being a copywriter is a job you need to be qualified. Don’t try to do it unless you got the right skills for it.Background Image(s)Totally distracting. Especially with those scrolling effects.About meOkay, but the drop shadow looks like 2002 and don’t use rounded corners unless you know why you’re doing it. Don’t just use them because you can.That being said, I measured you site by international standards done by professionals with years of experience. So it may have been a bit harsh.Just remember: don’t use technology (parallax effects, rounded corners, transparency …) just because you can, but because it fulfils a purpose your project needs.Keep it simple, knowing how to properly use type is important and the background has to stay in the background, don’t make it pop out.Take a look at this page: Schauperl.com Schauperl.com Very good use of big images. Typography with good contrast. No distracting effects.
Well.. When you look at your work..do you see what needs improving? From there you can practice on those. But you really need to practice. Just small sketches and drawing. Look at pictures for reference..look around see how objects have shadows and shapes. Sketch your little heart out. It is very rare for someone to extremely gifted right away. But keep sketching till you feel you have gotten some progress. Then try again.Even I constantly erase if I got something wrong. Don't give up..just keep trying.
I will try to be nice. Logos can be very subjective but there are some basic rules that should be followed.The font. Very important to use an appropriate font that crosses different mediums well (print, video, web, mobile, etc...).Font choice. While not horribly bad, this font does not add to the design. Arial Rounded MT Bold while not a classic font is still way above the realm of Comic Sans.Kerning (spacing between the letters). I can always tell the professional level I am working with when a "designer" does not take the time to properly kern (space) between the letters for a consistent look and flow. They just let it auto-kern. Bad form and just plain laziness or lack of knowledge.Font size. CAPS, mixed sizing, or lowercase that is the question. Does all CAPS or all lowercase lend the logo the elements it needs. Here I do not think the all lowercase adds to the logo at all. Not very striking.Font Grade: C+. While not horrible it needs some customized work to bring it up to a professional level. I do not think the all lowercase works well.Color. Colors play a very important role in logo design. Color will invoke different reactions from men/women and different societies. It can also be your downfall if you pick a color that looks great on screen but does not transfer well across different mediums.The color this designer picked looks vibrant and catching onscreen, but it is likely going to cause you some serious problems down the road if you keep it.Here are some color comparisons for web, print, video, lab. As you see by the comparison of complementary colors this green color is hitting the high side of neon. Not a good choice in my opinion.COLOR GRADE: D-. While not an F, this color shows the designer does not have a good understanding of color theory and was probably just going for a color that "popped" on the screen.Presentation. Presentation of all the elements in a logo are also important.Not exactly sure what the little green arrow on the right is trying to do. To me it does not do anything except make the logo not all text.Overall. I think the designer has just taken the style of logos that are currently in vogue and modified it to your product/service.The question really is do you like it or not? You are the one that has to live with it.
:( Please can you give me some help/feedback on my music...?
www.youtube.com/ambersaurusss It would mean so much to me if you could check out my YouTube Channel quickly and listen to my Original Song on there, called "Wash Away." Lately I've been losing so much confidence in my voice because people just don't seem to like it... :/ If you do like it PLEEEASE subscribe and comment on the video. If you could share it with others that would also be a huge help. I would appreciate it so much, thank you so much if you do. Love, Amber.
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