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I just got my first paycheck and I worked 70 hours and get paid $9 an hour. My amount was 321.90 which is a lot less than I think should. I use this paycheck calculator and I should have at least $552. I get a pay card instead of an actual paycheck. I’m gonna call my boss anyway but I just want a second opinion.
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Ok i hate my life so much i see my other friends how their parents treat them and mines is so diffrent. im 14 turning 15 next year. im not allowed to wear shorts paint my nails or do anything. my mom never lets me do anything when i ask her she says no. me and my mom have no good relationship i swear shes ruining my life i cant do anything. im not allowed to have sleep overs or hang out i cant stand her i have good friends they arnt bad we dnt do anything bad. I Hate my life so much i wish i could run away i hate it. this summer i have nothing to do just stay home. my mom doesnt do anything with us we just stay home everyday my life is boring other people are allowed to do things i hate my life i put on shorts that were a little bit above my knee and she told me to take them off because im showing my legs. shes trying to stop me from wearing foundation to cover up my acne scars. life sucks, i see my other friends how friendly they r with their moms and im just sitting there wishing i had their lives. their mom takes them places all my mom does is say no and not do anything i do all the chores in the house i have a 16 year old brother but hes no use
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No, the sentence, “By 2009, John was on parole and had begun teaching French” does not sound right.There are a number of interpretations for right.One is, is grammatically correct. I think in this case, it is not because one begins teaching French on one day, not during a nonspecific portion of a year. I would use a less restrictive clause such as “taught French”. When he began is less interesting.Also “on parole” might work better as a specific duration if known such as “beginning in 2009, John spent two years on probation”, or, at the start of 2009, John was released on parole. Here again, I'm using specificity to mark the day of release into an ongoing activity.“By 2009,” is a phrase of attainment, so on parole works but beginning hasn't attained.A second interpretation of right calls in questions of morality, justice, jurisprudence, rights etc.Is it right for a convict to teach?Is it right for someone on probation to teach?Does the age group taught matter?As a reader, the juxtaposition is curious, rather than right or wrong. I want to know how a teacher was arrested or how a convict became a teacher and answers to the above questions, regardless of the morality or societal view of this question.I know that people in the US undergo a police check if they work with minors, but I don't know the exact status of what makes a reject by the education system.
Does this Paycheck sound right?
I get paid 10/hr and I worked 43 hours in this paycheck. I only received $227. I live in North Carolina but there is no way that taxes can take out $200 of my paycheck.
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"The basic situation of this story is about two city boys who know only little about life in the wilderness, when all of sudden it was their turn to take a dangerous trip into wilderness." I think I should somehow change the ending of it, I just don't know how. Please help!!!
Ovarian cysts? Does this sound right?
Okay I have a question about ovarian cysts. Basically I want to tell you my story, does this sound right to someone with experience in this area? Beginning of september I got a horrible pain on my side and go to the er. Find out I have a 4 cm cyst on the left and a 3 cm cyst on the right. Couple days later go to an obgyn. I start birth control and they say to come back in 2 months for a recheck. Come back in 2 months. The one on the right is gone but the one on the left is the same size. They say come back in 2 more months for another recheck. Came back today, 4 months since I was originally diagnosed. The one on the left shrunk to 2.5 cm. Doctor says don't worry they're resolving themselves. Come back if you ever have problems again. Problem is I'm not convinced. I'm dissatisfied with this small progress. And im in pain almost every day. Does this situation sound textbook to you? Or am I right to worry?
Does the sentence "My English is poor" sound right to you? What is the best way to express the same idea?
First, from the aspect of grammaticality or idiomaticity:"My ... is poor" isn't very idiomatic in English."My swimming is poor" well... "I'm a poor swimmer" or "I'm not a very good swimmer" might be better."My Maths is poor"... How about "I'm not very good at Maths" or "I'm poor at Maths" or "My Maths isn't very good"?"My speaking skills are poor"... How about "I'm a poor speaker" or "I'm not good at speaking"?"My jokes are poor"... more like, "I don't tell very good jokes" or "I'm not good at telling jokes" or "I'm poor at telling jokes".In each case, using "poor" as a predicative adjective is not very idiomatic. The more idiomatic alternatives are to say "I'm poor at...", "I'm not good at...", "My ... isn't very good". Alternatives are "My ... is terrible", "I'm hopeless at...", but that could only be used by a very good English speaker!If you want to include slangy expressions, you might say "My English sucks" --- but if your English was good enough to say that, you wouldn't need to say it at all!Second, from the cultural or sociolinguistic aspect:As Mikhail points out, you need to consider other aspects. Telling people your English is poor is just a statement; saying it won't necessarily get the effect that you want. If you say "My English is poor" or "My English is terrible" you might only succeed in getting people to say "No, your English is fine! Better than mine!", but that's not what you want.If you want the other person to be aware that you're still struggling with English and to make allowances for that, there are probably better ways of putting it. For instance, "Sorry, I haven't been learning English for very long, could you (...say that again please, ... slow down a bit, etc.)" or even "I'm still just learning English". If you want to signal that your expression may be awkward or you're not sure if you will be taken the right way, you might say "Sorry, I'm not sure how to say this in English but..."And in fact, if your English is really that "poor", people will pick up on it quite quickly. It may not be necessary to say anything at all.
Does it sound right that I received a note threatening excommunication from the Lutheran(ELCA) church ?
Unfortunately, yes. And it's a shame. This is not a Godly action. "By this all men will know that you are my disciples, if you love one another." John 13:35 There are reasons to excommunicate members, but this does not qualify. It's part of the politics of the church that would come between God and His children. Please consider that they don't realize what they are doing and forgive them, for your own spiritual health. And find a home church elsewhere, where they walk in the love and the Spirit of God. I'm so sorry you had this experience, and I hope this does not effect how you look at God. He loves you just the way you are and understands your situation. And even if you weren't able to make it to that building, He would meet you right where you are at. God bless you and may His peace surround you until He returns.