Descriptive writing on a dark alley way, a person walking through it?
I am writing a story and the main character is on the run, she runs down an alley way but i want to put some good descriptive writing in about it because my mind has gone blank!! Maybe convey emotion aswell like- i walked into the depth of the unknown, god knows what lurks in the Alley at this time. (night)
What are some examples of writing in third person and in second person?
Most books nowadays are either in 1st person (“I did, I went, I spoke”) or 3rd person (“She went, He did, They spoke”).Second person books are rare, because they’re a little bit tougher to write. Some really good books are R. L. Stine’s “Give Yourself Goosebumps” series, where “Reader beware: you choose the scare!”Choose your own adventure books are good candidates for the second person because it helps the reader be immersed in the story.
Can you give an example of a "descriptive paragraph" about famous person?
Here is a sample copy about the famous Bollywood actor Dilip Kumar.Dilip Kumar, alias Yusuf Khan is 92 and he still possesses the large body of the Peshwari Pathan. Five years ago when I met him, he shook my hands strongly and whispered, “How are you?” softly like the way he speaks in his movies.A medium height, full hair on his head, large fore head and broad chest makes Dilip Kumar a kingly personality. Which ever roles he played from a lover boy of Ramshyam to the rebellious prince of Moghul e Azam or a disciplinarian father of Shakti, Dilip is really a King of Bollywood. He speaks slowly and that too in a rich Lahori Urdu. …If you notice in the above paragraph, i have describe the film star’s look and gave an example of his health while reasoning why he is the best in Bollywood even today. Add as many adjective as you can to describe the looks and decorate it with as many adverbs as you can when you describe the style.
How do I write a proper self description in SSB with in 15 minutes?
I have my very own self description (year 2016) which in the written form has been reviewed and appreciated by a retired Interviewing Officer of one of the SSB’s.Please have a lookNow you have fair bit of idea that 15 minutes is more than enough for writing anything about you and that too when you already go prepared.The language of text is not great deal of a concern but the content is. Still, trying to put across things in a slightly formal manner is advisable.ALL THE BEST !EDIT : Self-description test in the SSB is going to be redundant very soon as the proposed new SSB process is doing away with it besides introducing many other changes!
Description of a cute/hot guy?
As I was staring he suddenly jerked his head to move his hair; it caught the light and the golden gleam nearly blinded me. His hair itself was like spun gold, each thread falling perfectly, weaving together into curls that framed his tanned face. He paused for a moment, tapping his pen quietly on the desk before he continued writing. I watched his hand as he wrote. His fingers were long but strong looking, his fingernails pink and smooth, with half moons near the cuticles. My eyes wandered up his arm, to his strong forearm disapearing into the sleeve of his cross country jacket, pushed up to below his elbow to free his hands. I watched his hand as it moved up to rub some unknown irritant from his eye. His nose was straight and acquiline, his lips (his lips!) perfectly formed, parted slightly, his breath, I imagined, moving in and out in steady streams of air. Suddenly, he looked up and I caught a flash of is emerald eyes framed by tangled golden lashes before ducking my head and pretending to work on my test. I wrote this description under the assumption that the person describing him was a girl with a crush on him and they were both taking a test, him across the room. If that's not accurate you can pick out the bits you want.
Can someone give me a good visual description of a dark cave?
This is a description that I would use if I was writing a story. I took one look at open mouth of the cave. Its darkness seemed to envelope me in a never ending fortress of mystic. I stepped inside. My breathing slowed as I tried to take in more of the stale, humid air. I used the rough cave wall to guide me through it. I could hear a soft dripping noise as dew slid of the rocks. Drip, Drip, Drip, like a heartbeat. Spires of rock hung from the ceiling and stood erect upon the floor. A soft squeak alerted me to the presence of either mice or bats. The chilly draft sent shivers down my spine. This is a regular description: Humid, dark, rough, either black, brown, or grey stone with an assortment of small animals unless its home to a bear, wolf, ect. it usually has pillars of stone shooting down or up depending on location. I hope that helps.
Writing: How do I write a scene where one person is pointing a gun at another?
Write with experienced emotion. Suggest you borrow a pistol. Make certain it is not loaded. Ask someone to point the gun at your face, standing in close proximity. Ask them to hold that position for only 1 minute. How does that feel? Now you take the pistol and point it at someone's face, standing in close proximity for at least one minute. How do you feel?It makes little difference that the gun is not loaded. The mind imagines the terrifying result or sense of power. Now better armed with experience proceed to capture those emotions on paper. Another approach would ask others to participate and ask them how they feel on both sides of the experience,
What do I include when writing descriptions of things in stories?
Readers only see stuff related to a conflict. You may write a long lyrical description, they read Blah blah crypt blah blah vault blah vampire blah blah.So in general only describe things are a player in a conflict, an arena for a conflict, or what a conflict is about.This need not be physical conflict. For example, if the character is sword to monogamy, then the physical charms of Tempting Others are players in the conflict, a club is an arena, and their relationship is what it's about.Old blog entry here might help: The Strife Ray | M Harold Page
How do I describe shooting someone in the 3rd person perspective in a writing?
There are many ways you can write that. It honestly just depends on how much you want to emphasize the scene and its emotional impact.If you want to write a profound scene (By profound, I mean emotionally profound to the characters and the reader), you need to drag out the scene by describing the scene with the 5 senses.For example:He leveled the revolver at his best friend’s chest, his fingers quaking as he felt the cold metal grow increasingly heavy with the passing second. He spoke, his voice a soft plea, “James, please. Don’t make me do this.”James’s face only grew more grim. His grip tightened on the woman’s throat at his side, and his grip on the knife in his other hand was unwavering. Speaking into the cold night air with a cutting tone, he replied, “I can’t.”With a breath and a blink of an eye, he didn’t even feel his finger twitch on the trigger. The shot was muffled, as though the sound traveled through sea water to his ears. He could only watch, still, as the other man stumbled back and stared down at the red blossoming at his chest, before he collapsed and the knife slowly clattered to the floor.If you’re aiming for something more factual you can be more simple because you don’t need to be so dramatic.Take this for example:With a determined stare, he pulled the trigger with a reverberating bang. The criminal fell to his knees in shock as he clutched at his bleeding chest, his knife clattering to the floor.I hope this helps.