How do I conclude a personal statement?
Preparing for the admission process, you may need personal statement help to cope with your personal essay, different applications, and forms. For sure, a personal statement is one of the most important paper and you have to write it correctly.There are 3 parts:IntroductionMain bodyConclusionYou should understand that all of these parts are extremely significant. The introduction must be interesting and intriguing. Your task is to attract the audience. If there are some troubles, look through some samples but never copy content.In the main body, you will emphasize the academic background, skills, experience, maybe future plans.And the final step is the conclusion. Here you have to sum up your essay in two sentences. This is more about your emotions. Show that you are interested in the faculty and university in general, you want to study here and it would be so awesome to get this chance.
Grammar: Which is correct from the following statements and why: "I'm a friend of your mother's" or "I'm a friend of your mother"?
I know native speakers may say both, but I have to disagree with some of the distinctions made in other answers. Gramatically speaking, either you use 'of' OR the genitive ('s) to denote the relationship but not both in the same sentence:I'm a friend of your mother. OR, I'm your mother's friend.For me, the sentence, 'I'm a friend of your mother's.' begs the question 'A friend of mother's what?', Her dog, perhaps?EDITI noticed a comment that this wasn't strictly possessive, but while we all recognize the similarities between her book and her friend, we also recognize that the first relates to possession and the second still uses the possessive adjective, but to indicate a quite different relationship.As I said at the beginning, natives do use the double genitive. And if we use pronouns in the same phrase, I don't think many would say 'a friend of her' (or 'him'), but would prefer 'a friend of hers/his'.
Please can someone do me the huge favor to spell check this email need to send dean of university important!?
Hi Mr. Robertson my name is *********. I was enrolled in Miami Dade College I decided to transfer to Florida International University. I went to the office and explained to them that I have recently received my work permit (1-12-11),Residency card (3-22-2011) and License,vehicle registration (2-14-2011). I was told to bring my marriage certificate and my wife's passport,voter registration and W2 form. They led me to believe that everything was fine (I turned in all of my wife's documents) and after I put the deposit they told me I would be charged out of state, I was never charged out of state fee in Miami Dade College. I then spoke to someone else and told them that the student helping me for weeks never informed me of this and they responded by saying (it was not the students problem to inform me of that). I believed her response to be rude and I figured the student working there would be responsible to tell me this before I put a deposit, I was led to believe once I turned in my wife's documents I would be able to pick my classes and be charged in state. I need to start classes this semester and it is too late to go back to Miami Dade College because there classes already started and I already put a deposit in FIU. I need to start FIU this semester with in state tuition (I can't afford to pay out of state). I have lived in Miami all my life and have my temporary residency card and all documents). *I have high school transcripts that indicate that I have attended Dr.Michael Krop for four years. *I have bank statement (that I actively use) with my wife for over a year. *I am in the records to have attended Highland Oaks Middle and Ojus in Miami. *I would have my permanent residency this February for over a year. *I received all my immigration Torches (that I am approved). I have my work permit since (1-12-11), Residency card (3-22-2011), Driver License(2-14-2011) and Vehicle Registration u (2-14-2011). * I decided to contact you because I feel you would have the power to help me. I have been in Deans list in MDC and I just want to be an addition to the team at FIU. Thank you so much.
Could someone check my grammar on this email I made? its going to someone that works with the newspaper.?
I suggest you shorten the first part, or the person reading it will lose interest: Hi, my name is ... I was given your contact details by (the lady's name) who said you might be able to help me regarding supplying photos to ................. I take photos, often of car accidents and have submitted them to ........... a few times. I should like to get some more information on submitting pictures to ........... and the legal position of photographers in this state. What type of photos is .............. looking for? What is the deadline for submitting photos? Is there anything I need to know about the law when stopping on side of the highway/road to take photographs of a car accident or house fire? Can you give me any other hints or tips? Many thanks for your help.
Can anyone proofread and edit my personal statement for residency?
If you’re looking for high-quality residency personal statement editing help, it’s better to hire a professional writer who’ll write you an outstanding essay. There are lots of proofreading and editing services on the web that can check your work and guarantee the highest results.Some of them are:Best Admit;True Editors;Elite Essay Writers;Personal Statement Writing Services;Scribendi;DLA Editors;Essay Edge, etc.You can see a great personal statement for residency sample above. It’s useful to search for such examples before you start writing your own admission essay.The residency personal statement is used by the reviewers to find information that wasn’t included in your CV, such as applicant’s qualities and motivations or any interesting details that would grab the admissions committee’s attention.In general, here’s what your residency PS should contain:what motivated you to choose this particular speciality;skills and qualities you have to succeed in this program;personal character traits that make you a perfect match for the field;your short- and long-term goals;give specific examples of experiences that demonstrate your skills and explains your career choice.
Faith Statement Essay Feedback Please :)?
You do have punctuation/grammar errors, plus one or two typos. Some of your sentences lack parallel structure. Organization: I don't think that quote works very well with your essay. I mean, it's related to it somewhat, but not really. I think you need some kind of transition between your paragraph about observation to your paragraph about experience, a connection somehow. Content-wise: Your essay is...nice, I suppose. It does give insight to your thoughts and experiences, but I'm not sure if it's strong enough. There are no profound revelations -- your ideas/development in faith are actually quite common. Of course, your essay could still be very original despite this, but it's not at that point yet. Find ways to evoke emotions with your words, and make a reader empathize with you. I'd suggest editing, if not restarting the entire thing. Maybe instead of trying to cover so many different things, you could concentrate on one very specific experience, and talk about how that influenced you ;) Good luck!! **EDIT: what kind of college are you applying to with this? If it's a school like Notre Dame, that essay will definitely not work. if it's a less prestigious school, you'll get a little more slack (though not enough to get away with a weak essay).
I need help editing and rewriting my statement of purpose for graduate school. What online services are available?
If you’re just looking for someone to check your grammar, then Fiverr is a cost-effective option.However…You don’t get any additional points for submitting an essay with perfect grammar — that is a minimum baseline admissions committees expect. The deciding factor is the content of your statement of purpose.If you’re looking for assistance on the content, as well as grammar, of your essay, then you’re much better off working with folks who specialize in: 1) helping applicants identify their most important traits to talk about, and 2) effectively communicating that.Think of it like this:You can go to pharmacy and buy an over-the-counter drug (and hope it is the right one for your condition)…OR you can go to a doctor that will diagnose what’s wrong with you and prescribe you the exact medication you need.——It all depends on what you truly need (grammar vs. content). If it’s the latter, then check out RizeU; we might be able to help you.