Help me on ending 4 short story.?
Ok so group1 is the half that goes to find witnesses group2 is the half that's in the cemetery Have group1 trick the witnesses into going with them to the cemetery in a friendly way, thinking they'll only talk with them or perhaps make a deal of some kind with them to keep them from talking. Meanwhile, have group2 at the cemetery waiting with weapons of some kind, at first group1 thinks its a scare tactic but when one of the witnesses tries to get away, have one of group2 shoot them, which causes group1 to start freaking out about now having committed murder just trying to cover their butts. Then have the groups turn on each other group1 wanting to save the witnesses, group2 wanting to kill not only the witnesses but now also group1. The witnesses and group1 team up and end up killing group2 in self defense. Then, the witnesses go to the police and make up a story about what happened blaming group2 for everything and letting group1 off the hook. eh, off the top of my head
Need help with ending of story? really cheesy?
plot: the main character is the most popular boy in the school. he was dating the most popular girl, but they broke up because the girl was an annoying drama queen. BUT THEN the boy dates a less popular girl. but she is the ONE. so they fall in love (but he doesn't know this yet). BUT THEN he has to choose between them. he chooses the popular one because he is confused. BUT THEN they are all at a party, and they have karaoke there. the unpopular girl sings "you belong with me" by taylor swift, and the popular boy suddenly understands everything and kisses the unpopular girl in front of everyone, thereby proving that they will live happily ever after. too cheesy to take. D': it needs a happy ending :) thanks for your advice! ps: yes, i posted this question before, but i forgot to mention that i want it to have a happy ending, so the answers i got suggested very depressing endings D:
I need help with the clues, detective, and ending for this story I'm writing? (mystery)?
I'm sorry this is so long, but I really would appreciate your help, those of you that are into this story writing stuff!! (; I have to write a short mystery story for my english lit. class, and I already have an idea. It's just, I can't seem to get any ideas for the clues, detective, suspects, and also how it ends. It's kinda off of a Grey's Anatomy show that I watched, so here it is. I hope you guys can help, I'm kinda desperate now! So, a doctor is doing a heart surgery (or some kind of major surgery) and during the surgery, the assistant is holding the heart and her nail accidentally punctures the glove, and nicks the heart, but she doesn't know that yet, and nobody even notices. They finish up the surgery, and it is "successful". (The main surgeon, not the one that nicks the heart, is known as one of the best heart surgeons in the world. His success rate is like 97%). But when she is cleaning up and taking off her gloves, she notices a hole from her nail, and she instantly feels guilty. Nobody else knows except her, and she is in a panic state for days. So the head surgeon goes and reassures the wife, who is relived soo much. But then he dies a few days later, (due to the nick from the assistants nail). The head surgeon asks if he can do an exploratory surgery to see what went wrong and the wife agrees, so he does it and finds the little nick. He then concludes that a person who was with him during the surgery had done this, and he calls all of the staff in that surgery team together to find out who did it.............HOW DO I END THIS? (I actually am thinking about the head surgeon being the detective in this story...because he seems like the role that would fit. What do you think?) I don't know how to wrap this up, and I am COMPLETELY OPEN to any ideas you guys have. You could even create a whole other mystery setting and ideas for me, I wouldn't mind in the least bit. (; So I guess my main questions are: 1. the one in the parenthesis about the head surgeon being the detective role. 2. help with clues to weave into this story 3. how to END THE STORY 4. Any other ideas? i'm completely open!! also, this has to be a 5-7 page typed story, do you think it will fit?? thanks so much you guys if you helped me answer this question ;) you could also email me too if you really feel like it and could help me mymelody.8738@yahoo.com
I Need An Ending For My Ghost Story Please Help x ?!?
Well HeresS Thee Start Fill Inn The Rest If You Can x Thank You x :-)) ; The story took place 100 years ago,before electricity,when they used candle light for lamps & horses for transport ,in the time of old.....So lets take you back to the old hotel in Glensville in the West Coast of Scotland.... There had been many stories about the Logan's Inn.They say its haunted,that the spirit of an old ship builder lurks in the shadows,watching your everymove,that follows everyone who stays there,some say that he leaves clues and things similiar to footsteps on where he's been and some say he's a ghost........ It was summertime and the Cassidy family were wanting to go for a small family trip to the west coast of Scotland.They found a newspaper with holiday hotels,inns and apartments when hey stumbled upon The Logan's Inn,they thought it looked beautiful and it sounded like the perfect place.Before they knew it,they were gone,on their way to the Inn they thought was the perfect place but it was about to be the holiday thrill of their lives....(carry on from here it has to be about four jotter pages long )
The Necklace[story]... need help for english?
I hate this type of assignment. This story already has a perfectly good ending. Why go and try to write an alternate one? Perhaps you are supposed to write an "epilogue," an extra chapter of sorts explaining your idea of what happened next. If you have read and thoroughly understood this story, you should have no difficulty in doing this if you use your imagination. Mathilde discovers that the diamond necklace which she borrowed from her wealthy friend, Madam Forestier, 10 years earlier and lost at a party was in reality a worthless piece of costume jewelry. Mathilde and her husband have ruined their lives by working their fingers to the bones paying off all their debts incurred by purchasing a genuine diamond necklace to replace the one they lost. Mathilde meets Madam F. accidentally one afternoon in the park, where M. is shocked to learn the truth. The story ends there. What happens next? Who knows? Perhaps M. asks her old friend if she still has the real necklace. If so, then perhaps Madam F. will return it so that Mathilde and her husband can sell it and recover some of their money and get a new start in life and not have to continue living in poverty. But Madam F. is under no obligation to give up the valuable piece. Maybe she lies and says she no longer owns the necklace. Since she is still rich, but Mathilde has turned into a red-faced, ugly washer woman, I doubt they will ever see each other again since they obviously run in different social circles now. Maybe Mathilde goes nuts and begins to stalk Madam F. until the police are called in and Mathilde is hauled off to the insane asylum. (a kind of Fatal Attraction ending) Good luck on your essay.
How do I write story endings?
This is a piece of advice from a friend of mine. I struggled with the same problem. It may help. When you start writing a story , think of an end also , then proceed with the heart of the story. There is no point of writing and writing and writing with no end. Frame the starting and the ending. Continue with the heart of it later. You can always edit your endings as the story proceeds.Just make sure you have an idea of how you want to conclude it. For example , X wrote an essay on why he likes to write stories. Writing stories changed him and helped him evolve into a better person. So when X wrote the essay , he began with what kind of stories and all that but he knows that when he ends the essay he wants to tell how much writing stories helped him.So , my suggestion is , end in a such a way that it leaves a message to the reader. When you structure your plot for the story , you must have an idea of how you want it to end. You have to visualise the ending and improvise as you write. Try that. It helped me. Hope it helps you !
How do you write a good ending to a story?
Your story goes like this:I see two children in needI think about being judgemental about the person who put them in need.I decide not to be judgemental.The children are probably all right in the end.And for me that doesn't work. I was hoping the story would go:I see two children in needI don't like feeling judgemental but I call Social Services anywayI hang around to see what happensSocial Services provide help to the children but it turns out that the situation wasn't as bad as I thought (for some plausible reason). The children are safe.As it stands, we don't know the ending to the story.If your point is that being judgmental is wrong, then you need to start with that, so that the final ending answers the questions you've raised in the reader's mind at the start of the piece. So you would start by musing on how easy it is to be judgemental and how hard to stop those judgements, although I still think the story would have a stronger ending if you actually found out what happened and didn't just assume what came next.Thinking of it as question and answer is key: when you start a story you raise questions in the reader's mind. You need to make sure that the ending of the story answers those questions.You might want to check out Critique Circle Online Writing Workshop to get some input into your writing, although I have to say that the quality of the critiques varies widely. On the other hand, critiquing other people's stories is a great way to work out what makes a story effective for you.
I can never seem to come up with endings for my stories, even when I try outlining them. What’s your advice?
This is perfect question for me. The writing is the easy part. I bang out first drafts at a rate of 5–7K a day once the plot is organized. I work with Excel and sheets 1–5″ scraps of paper. I can play around with the order that way. I start writing and let my characters take over my book… it becomes their story… It’s such an amazing process for me now—it wasn’t always that way.Then, just when I think I have it figured out, I will be typing and have to stop. Something/someone decides NOT to follow my carefully structured story. At that point I know I have a good book! This week, I LOST THE CHILDREN! I was really laughing about that. A Jet Action novella based on the premise of sexual exploitation—I can’t LOOSE the children!! But I did. And I loved that.I don’t fight the process. I let it flow. So for the next twenty four hours I did other things, and smiled to myself. Instead of worry, I took the attitude that I’d brought my story alive and it was now in the hands of my Muse… and the next stages would appear. The endings will fall into place if you have a story to tell. Trust me. It’s like running a marathon, with allowable breaks to breathe, get hydrated, take your time and still hit the finish line.So like the book “Who Moved My Cheese” we want to control our story but it’s only when we let go that the magic happens.Listen to interviews with Stephen King. He doesn’t even plot!!! Hah, I love that! I need to plot. One idea, leads to another, I have 60% down, and then I let the characters take over. And in my case, even though I write action/mystery and contemporary fiction, I still get so excited when I hit a wall. I know that’s when my story is going to take on a life ot it’s own. And that, for me, is why I write.
I don't know how to end my murder story. Help?
it cood b lyke, wile hes eating breaktfast on day or somthin the creepy guy cood poison him or something. or the dude with the tires cood get cawt steeling something but he didnt no he was bein watched while steeling it n win the creepy guy confronts him he cood pull out a gun n shoot him or somethinn steel more of the money n get a tire off creepy guys truck n run away wit the body n take it to some lake n dump it in a deep place so it cant be found. then some one reports creepy dude missing n someone sai they saw him with tyre dude n they question him n let him go. but something happens n they have to call him bak n they start suspecting n put him on trial n all tht n then he go ta jail. he cood even break out of jail or something... but im no good at writing sooo, yep...P: But i like the second one best