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Is This Sentence Clear

Is this sentence clear and correct?

It's understandable but not really clear. This is a run-on sentence. A little rewording would make it easier to follow:I used to be friends with Abigail. I didn't always follow her advice,  but it was always appreciated.Or,Abigail, who was once my friend, gave good advice. I appreciated that, and sometimes I even followed it.Or,Abigail was once my friend, and I appreciated the good advice she always gave, even though I didn't always follow it.

Make a sentence with clearing.?

I was clearing my Inbox just now. - used as a verb

Rangers make sure there's a good clearing in the forest to ensure people's safety. - used as a noun

Is this sentence "CLEAR to UNDERSTAND"...?

During my first BSC (Honours) degree in Computer Science and Business Administration, I learned business management skills relating to commercial organizations."

To

During my first BSC (Honours) degree in Computer Science and Business Administration, I was instructed in business management skills in relation to commercial organizations. I learned how to apply the principles and lessons of management ...

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During my first BSC (Honours) degree in Computer Science and Business Administration, I was instructed in business management skills with emphasis on commercial organizations. I learned how to apply the principles and lessons of management ...


Instruction as opposed to proof of learning and application are 2 different depths of credibility and understanding. It's the whole monkey Shakespeare thing. If viable and/or applicable, "show the work" in relation to the education.

In a law personal statement you need to show why you are among the best and brightest, and break stereotypes by being unique and well thought in your submission.

Such things as "learned" and "taught" are trip wires and provide an opportunity to divulge your experiences and unique abilities.

Good Luck!!

Which sentence is most correct, clear, and concise?

Which sentence is the best?


a) We sat in our car munching on popcorn watching the sailboats race.

b) Sitting in our car watching the sailboats race, we munched on popcorn.


c) Watching the sailboats race, we sat in our car munching on popcorn.

Which sentence is the most correct, clear, and concise?

D. All the sentences say essentially the same thing, but D uses the fewest words (concise), the most familiar and straightforward words (clear), and is grammatically correct. The other three sentences try to make a simple statement sound complicated by using a long word where a short one will do, an unfamiliar word where a familiar one will do, and a jumbled bunch of words where five will do the job elegantly.
Too many people think that the way educated or intelligent people express themselves is by making their statements hard to understand. In fact, such an effort merely makes a writer look self-serving.

Does this sentence make it clear that he surveyed for the cameras?

Thanks for the A2A.The sentence is certainly lengthy, and a bit cumbersome. The idea gets across to the reader, but they have to work for it a bit. Just consider revising it. Perhaps something like this: "He had already surveyed the building yesterday.  Confidently, he strolled past the reception desk cameras, undetected."28 words to 16, and the same message was conveyed. Details are important, but always looks for ways to simplify the wording.

Which sentence is the most correct, clear, and concise?

A) In the world's society to today, what most people agree is needed is some sort of decisive action
B)Today we need prompt action.
C) At this point in time there is a need for swift, prompt action.
D) In this modern world of today, what is needed is immediate action.

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