Second writing audition piece - opinions needed?
im talented to and im a great singer everyone thinks so.i wanna be noticed im trying to find like a summer music camp
That truly depends on your intended audience, because the strength of an opinion is relative to the way you would have felt when structuring your article.If it’s for me, I’d have written it on account that I wish to structure my opinions in a way that seems coherent to myself.Why do I hate it? How does this appeal to my principles? What is its core value that makes it so interesting? Deciding if I should be biased or perhaps proceed with a simple inflection, the endgame is that it is still an opinion; simply one that only I may understand in my own context.Now, I write on account of others whom I have desire to share with.I decide, do I wish to start out strong? If I do, I may risk losing the interest of my readers halfway through my inflections, and the rest of the opinion piece would be left to dust. I ponder again, and go with a method akin to a grapevine.The value of an opinion is decided based upon the overall impression you describe of it, hence I build upon my opinion an image of which my readers would piece together, little by little, nonetheless interesting so that they may understand my opinion the way I have intended as I would have dug deeper into their mind with observations and aspects. I leave my biases out the door, so they would build around my opinion their own inflections.The opinion is strong if it takes root akin to a rooted tree, grown steadily through time and space as it is tougher and stronger than a mere daisy placed in a vase.Least, that is how I see it.
Read and share your opinion on my writing piece?
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Multi Paragraph Opinion Piece , Writing it HELP!?
you have the idea yes, your paper should look kind of like this: (paragraph 1) i think this and to make you think it too i will discuss these three points. point 1. point 2. point 3. (paragraph 2) transition. topic (should reflect your point 1). proof (a fact that supports your topic opinion). discuss how that fact relates to your topic opinion. conclude with how the fact supports your view on your topic opinion (paragraph 3) topic (should reflect your point 2). proof (a fact that supports your topic opinion). discuss how that fact relates to your topic opinion. conclude with how the fact supports your view on your topic opinion (paragraph 4) topic (should reflect your point 3). proof (a fact that supports your topic opinion). discuss how that fact relates to your topic opinion. conclude with how the fact supports your view on your topic opinion (paragraph 5) so in considering point 1, point 2, and point 3, it is clear to me that my opinion about the subject is right. something like that, fill in your opinion and facts etc as apropriate
Opinions on the grand Line on One Piece?
They did not exagerate on the deadlyness of the grandline. If Luffy wasn't as strong as he is and hadn't picked the people he picked to join his crew, and was the luckiest SOB on the planet, they would have been dead 100 times by now. And I'm not even talking about the fights he gets into. For one without Nami they would have been killed by the weather. The cyclone that nearly took out the Merry Go would have killed any normal vesal. Since she is so good they managed to miss it. The sea kings would be a very dangerious obsticle too. There have been times that the sea kings surface and again would take out a normal vesal, but because they have some of the strongest people from East Blus and Devil Fruit users, they are able to excape harm. The knock-up stream would take out normal vesals too, but with Nami's help they were able to survive that. What would the Straw Hats have done to get to the next island when thier log post was pointing at the Sky Island. If they hadn't gotten the Eternal Post for Jaya, they would have been lost at sea, but they are super lucky and were able to survive that. Many other pirates are taken out to because they are pirates. Normal pirate crews would have been taken out at Wiskey Peak. Normal Pirate crews would have been captured by the marines and had thier boat sank. Normal pirates crews fall prey to the other pirates, like Foxxy and Moria. Normal pirates would die from the ingeries and diseases they catch on the Grandline. Baisically, if they did not have some of the best people in One Piece, both in strenght, devil friut abilities, and other skills, the Straw Hats would not have survived this long.