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Your lyrics are very eloquent. Sounds as if you are battling with a toxic virus of "hate/rage" and are recovering with strong immunity against future infections. Interpersonal boundaries are very important to recognize in order to avoid infections of any vulnerable emotions within the self and/or others. Take care!
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I am writing a song that I have been working on for a year and I’m finally finished. Here are lyrics: the song is called “Sherona”. Lyrics: Do you remember our trip to California? Do you remember the sun daze wedding ring? On Sherona when we jumped when we sang sherona, when we drive, when we come now it’s 2014 time for Atlantic waterfall we are fruit on the grapevine because we are done with the wine in the end Sherona when we drive when we come Sherona when it’s time when you like Sherona!!!
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now i'm of presenting age to be forgetting you some where downtown where are berleask queen may even ask my name as she sheds her skin i;m sitting and preparing to dace under the clubs pa the strip joints while i'm afraid that i'm exactlly where you'd you like me to be while i'm afraid tht i wouldnt be caught deead in this place i'm exactull where you like me you know make love and a lap dance ya your payin for love ya payin for love
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This is a good start but it's not quite connecting with the listener. I feel slightly disconnected from your story. I get it but it doesn't mean anything to me. This could be that it's a little too direct. We need to write it so that it is a bit more interpretive. This makes it appeal to more people and allows people to find something personal in it even if it's not what you meant it to mean. But don't write it too vague as well. I might rephrase (just an idea):"My thoughts are nocturnalMy feelings stay inside."my thoughts/head dwells in the cold of night. my heart trapped insideif only you could feel like i feelwe'll be alrightMy head gives the listening something to relate too, thoughts is more abstract but using my head means thoughts. This is the same with heart, they can feel it as they can relate. It also has different meanings for everyone. Again you could feel, is a stronger connecting word. When you say everything will be alright what do you mean. I've used We'll be alright. So this person is saying I'm in this relationship and I'm keeping things hidden for this other person. If this other person could only know what I'm feeling our relationship won't suffer that much. This relates to a more universal experience and people can connect with it.Keep this in mind and listen to your favorite songs and other songs as well. I don't really like RnB but enjoyed Climax from Usher, look for those connecting words like "I'm on my knees" instead of saying I'm begging, knees you can kind of feel but begging is harder to connect with. Don't over use it and get the "feel" for where it's needed. Writing is a process like any other art, constantly refine it till it sounds great! Hope this helps. Keep working at it, you'll find your style and your writing voice!
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I wrote song lyrics for a song I’m writing, the name of the song is “Melissa’s parents”. Here are the lyrics: Melissa cries, Melissa fights for her life, she’s on the way to psycho with her dad, Melissa smokes, and then she’s broke she’s got no way of conformity, Melissa fights with her mom over the night but the right thing to do is fly a kite, Melissa’s parents, working day and night they come home and pray for Melissa to be okay, Melissa chokes, when she’s smokes shes on her way to recovery. Melissa writes, that she’s shy but the teacher still makes her present in front of the class, Melissa’s bass, where she learned in class won’t do her any good in this awful world, so she’s curls in a ball and makes her little brother fall, Melissa’s fine but she’s nine so why are Melissa’s parents a canine?
What do you think of these lyrics? BE HONEST!?
666 Calling the devil 666 Server of sin 666 He's the savior 666 In serpents skin Shapeshifter gonna take the other form now Blood ritual darkness is born Shapeshifter gonna take your life now Blood ritual darkness is born Put your faith in god, and everything's alright Put your faith in god, and rise above Put your faith in god, and sleep well at night Put your faith in god, peace and love Amen everyone is saved now Amen we are cleansed of sin Amen you're the fools they own you Never free, never been Serpent society their slithering dynasty Take a look around Serpent society their slithering dynasty It's all around They rule you They rule you They rule you They rule you the christian religion is a tool to enslave people. can you not see? now anssewer honestly,what do you think of those song lyrics?
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I've been writing songs, this one is called "Forever Shining" here are the lyrics: Do you shine? do you bright? do you far? where you are? where's your mom? where's your dad? come on over here and listen to the fad, did your friend? did your dad? did your sister? back then in the old days we said don't don't don't do do that because shining is for kids who said that? lets all adventure on the next high way, do you shine? do you far tell me where you really are? i'm a car your on mars now we're far, let's laugh at time, laugh at grace from where we are so let's just shine.