What do you think about my song?
First, kudos for writing and putting it out there, and asking for opinions. I think the previous comments are mostly on target… just a few other things:The harmonies are, indeed, out of tune. If spending a lot more time on them doesn’t improve them, you may need to only play guitar and get others to sing. Time will tell.If I was producing this as an album track, there are few notes here and there that I would advise something different. It’s too hard to “produce” you from here, but there are tweaks that probably should be made. Others with good ears will find them and help you, I bet.Here’s a compositional help I have always remembered: In general, don’t do anything EXACTLY the same twice in a row. If you must do something twice, certainly don’t do it a third time. All you have to do is change one note or one rhythm to keep it fresh.When someone listens to a song, it’s as if a game is being played… they are always trying (whether they realize it or not) to guess what comes next. If they are right all the time (see above) they will be bored. If they are wrong all the time, they will be bored. But if they are right MOST of the time, but not ALL of the time, they will like it. Then the changes you’ve made elicit “Oh cool, I didn’t expect that!”Keep writing, keep performing and always get people to give their opinions. You get to decide what advice to accept or let slide. Try to keep your ego out of the way. You can learn from everyone. Good luck!
What do you think about this song?
According to me. The music of the song is average. And it lacks somewhere in lyrics part also. I didn't find that song very effecive. It didn't touched my heart just like the song AAHATAIN of AGNEE and many more of the songs like this. I wish these guys all the very best for their future work.
What do you guys think of my song?
I think your song's good. I don't know if you're the one who sing and rap in it too, but if you do, I'd like to make a suggestion.The rap part is good, but I think the refrain part could use some work. I believe it'll sound better if the vocal's turn up a little bit so it'll sound stronger. And if I were you, I would use only the piano and vocal for the ending.But then again, these are just a friendly advice. You can consider to use it or not. It's all up to you.I wish you all the best.Thanks for the A2A.
What do you think of my song lyrics?
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What do you think of my song lyrics?
I’m starting my career in songwriting and I hope to eventually get a record deal. I wrote this song recently and I want to see what you think. Oh yeah, uh huh (x3) If you want me you better better get me Cuz the night is going down, down You better get on it Because you know I wanna start it Oh yeah (x2) I’ve been waiting for this all week I wanna get away from life Oh yeah (x2) Get on the dance floor with me Let us party all night baby Oh yeah, come on If you wanna get on with me You know I’m always down Oh yeah, come on The night is still young I know you wanna party all night I can show you a good time This night will last forever Oh woah (x2) If you want it come and get it We can go all night on it Yeah (x2) Get on the dance floor with me Let us party all night baby Oh yeah, come on If you wanna get on with me You know I’m always down Oh yeah, come on Let us party all night Oh yeah (x2) We’ll be drinking on the dance floor and you know you’ll want more Oh yeah (x2) Let us party all night All night (x6) Get on the dance floor with me Let us party all night baby Oh yeah, come on If you wanna get on with me You know I’m always down Oh yeah, come on Get on the dance floor with me Let us party all night baby Oh yeah, come on If you wanna get on with me You know I’m always down Oh yeah, come on
What do you think of my song lyrics?
I love to write and I love to play music. I've never had the patience to actually write an original song until now for some reason. I just feel inspired. But anyway, this is what I have so far. It's about my aunt and it's an acoustic song. Intro : Another night staring out my window, into the black unknown. Wishing you would drop from the sky, wish for one last glance in your old eyes.. but you left us way too soon. What I would do for another second with you. (probably a humming part with an acoustic interlude or something here). Verse : The floor creaks the same way I do, (from all the aches, all the strain), on whatever of me remains. I'm waiting for my boards to cave. (for my boards to cave, the nails to break). It's something out of my control. Guess I should let her go (another interlude kind of thing). Chorus : Well I held your hand for the last time that night, on the side of your bed (your deathbed, your deathbed). It was Christmas time and all of the lights shined so bright (shined so bright for you) and I know that you can feel me here. Your eyes are shut, but your hands are moving. A recurring nightmare is just bound to consume me. That's all I have for now. I'm sure I wrote a lot of things that I will end up changing since all songs change eventually.. and I will try to finish it. I'm not going to change the overall theme of the song, as I want it to be dark since it was very dark and eerie when I wrote it. Any tips on word choice?