What is the name of a rap song about quitting school?
"I told the Board of Education that I'm bored of education." -- Chino XL
Rate my diss rap so far 1-10?
Take out the bit about 'Siram', he's got nothing to do with this, he doesn't deserve that however, exceptional rap. End it at, "those big ears could be a perfect place to store your mail". The other bit ruins it. You should put your talent to better use, don't diss people they diss you. You should be making songs, not raps about people who don't deserve to be rapped about. You're better than that man.
Rate this old Cage song?
It's not that old. I have a Cage song from 1988... 9/10 Have you heard Blood Boy by Cage? http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pse52kw4N... She had to leave him there, once he started breathing air // He could leave, she didn't need to be told his disease was rare // EDIT: Yeah, I heard that too. But I heard he said he's not going to talk about drugs anymore. Can't wait for "The Revenge of Chris Palko" @Below Me. His best album is Movies For The Blind or Hell's Winter. They're about equal quality. I prefer MFTB, but HW is great too. If you don't like one, you might love the other. They're almost entirely different.
What do you think about my rap lyrics?
English is not my first language but I used to read books in english last 2-3 years so I have managed to learn some. I'm writing lyrics because it helps me improve my english and I love doing it. I love rap too especially the Old School. Here's something I wanna talk about, No time for jokes,nor time to fool around, I'm serious,fast to confess cause I can't rest At night when I'm alone I feel depressed, Possessed, by this lady inside my chest, It's a mess,so I'm wondering what's next, It runs deep and feel it so vivid through my veins Feel free,got wings and broke my mind's chains Reason disappeared,I'm a fool,I act queer, Can't stand still,body's shaking, it can't be real Grab a beer,my soul's burning, I gotta chill, Wipe out the bottle's seal,it relaxes me a big deal My friends are talking,I'm choking,I can't hear em Can't heed,need to breathe, I must leave em ''Hold on,where are you going,what's wrong with you?'' ''I'm cool,gotta go home,got something to do!'' Thus I stepped out,turned around and Ciao! Thinking what is this all about, cause I can't follow What's happening?Why am I so tense? And suddenly I've seen it again,now it makes sense That smile,it was that smile that gave the spark The spark needed to ignite my premature heart, It's happening that thing of which the poets talk so loud Now I know what was all about,so here I go,I'm all out
Rate my Rap Lyrics
hmm not bad . i would give it a 7.6 on 10
Are my lyrics good enough to be a freestyle rap song... rate 1-10?
i was a fool through out all high school, breaking every rule, skipping off school with my homies the only ones that know me, im just trying to keep my head up and get through i only hang around with the people who are true i pray to the lord but he don't listen cause he knows for i have sin, i got my reason tryin to live through every season, who can you blame im smokin weed to help me take away the pain how lonely can one get walking around suffering from the pain gotta remain strong and hold on, marijuana had my mind gone it wasn't healthy but its the only thing that helps me got me puffin on weed watching my career bleed i can take a hit, thinking if its really worth it im getting tired of all this lecture bullshit, it aint what it used to be, im looking back at every memory, stuck livin this misery thinking who will remember me is life worth livin should i blast myself. im puffin on lie and its gettin me high, looking back at the world through my rear view, thinking do dreams really come true, im just trying to get pass through and forget about you while starrin at the world through my rear view when will i die, im getting high watching time fly, forever paranoid cause im high, who can you blame? smokin weed to help me take away the pain im walking around with my knife, cause some people just wanna try and take my life they wanna try and bust in my teeth, all im going to do it just get back to my feet i try to change my way and get through this day, staying true, real homies help you get through, i only got one true homie only this gun cause they aint know who truly know me put it to my head, lord are you there, then say a prayer they aint no one who i think who really cares, if you think im lying then lets see you make a dare im lost no where to run im in terror ( and also does it rhyme good and is it catchy )
Can you rate my rap for my girlfriend?
I'm making a rap for my girlfriend's birthday, suggestions or comments? this is just the first verse and i have no chorus yet I first saw you from the back of the room Just waiting to spring, so I could make romance bloom Thinking I should test it, then thinking I’m a fool Always on my mind, girl you’ve got me so consumed Walked with you to class, just tryna make you see All of the advantage and possibilities Of all that I could do, and how happy you could be If you would just say yes, and take a chance with me. I really don’t know why, But I knew that you were different. Maybe it’s your smile Or the way your eyes glisten But there was something you had That other girls didn’t Baby, I was lost Because I was what you’re missing. You’re my greatest quest and you’re my greatest mission There weren’t any airplanes, but baby I was wishin’ That we could be together and our love would be persistent You never know the future, but this is my prediction:
My horrorcore song rate please?
be mourn don't say i didn't try to warn bet you didn't know a killer can come in any shape or form even deformed struck by lightning during a rainstorm going door to door with swords kill you and leave you with open sores grab your b**** and choke her till her vocal cords don't work in her throat no more then grab the 2 by 4 hit her over the head then leave her by the shed while your dead in bed **** i need my meds quick some1 call the para.medics give this ***** some antasteic's not everything is copasetic when your girlfriends a diabetic they say slow and steady wins the race well then ill just pace back to my place dumb a*** cops said they couldn't even find a trace maybe they should stop smoking the **** that i laced said if i got caught that i would face 20 years in the worst prison in the united states maybe it fate but i think i'm contemplating on turning over to satan watch over whoever your dating because i'm debating on whether or not i should kill them thinking about turning my self in but then i think again why let all the fun and games end when it just begined
Rate My Lyrics Please (Different Lyrics, I write a lot of songs!)?
If you can fit the words 'profligate', 'glasnost' and 'brinksmanship' into it, then you'll have the job done.