What do you think of these song lyrics I wrote?
I am writing a few songs, here is one from my album it's called "Better than ever". Here are the lyrics: No matter who you are, no matter where you stay, you'll be better off indeed. No matter what they say it's just a day away, forget what the dirty voices say, they are just decayed and you are who you are. The haters might say i'm a waiter but they are changers, their mom raised them to be baiters oh waiters? it's the little things in life that they say, my mama told me never to play pretend, never give in to surveillance, no matter what they say you'll be okay in my book.
What do you think of this song i wrote for my boyfriend?
im a 15 yr old girl and writing songs is not just a hobby of mine but a passion and i hope my writing gets better and better cause id love to take writing seriously....what do you think of this song i wrote my boyfriend? he loved it! DISTANT LOVERS <3 we are far away in distance, but never far away in heart, your love makes my heart skip a beat,darling i miss you, when i wake up in the morning your on my mind, and your the one who gets the sun to shine, as much as i wish you were near me, im just glad that your my baby, and your mine, yes your all mine, cuz distance cant replace our love, our love is just too strong, oh baby it wont be long, till im wrapped up,just wrapped up in your arms, and we'll be alright, oh we'll be just fine, baby this is killing me, i cant get you off my mind, I think about you day and night, you are like my drug, and i take a dose everyday, im just so in love, with you in every single way, i think the lovebug, just took a bite out of my heart, and now im falling, ohh baby i need you, and i cannot wait to see you again cuz distance cant replace our love, our love is just too strong, oh baby it wont be long, till im wrapped up,just wrapped up in your arms, and we'll be alright, oh we'll be just fine, baby this is killing me, i cant get you off my mind, Now dont you ever leave me, you know you are my sweety:) i dont know what id do if you just walked away, cause darling i need you, and i will never leave you, i love you from the bottom of my heart, cuz distance cant replace our love, our love is just too strong, oh baby it wont be long, till im wrapped up,just wrapped up in your arms, and we'll be alright, oh we'll be just fine, baby this is killing me, i cant get you off my mind....<3
Which song would you dedicate to your girlfriend, boyfriend or spouse?
Have you ever watched the collision of two planets? She and I are specially designed to show it to the entire world.This song is for her. We had a Long Distance Relationship for 3.5 years. But then, on one grim day, when i was away from her for quite a long time (as per our regular intervals) ,some freedom and thrill seeking shade of my personality took over me. I lost her. She has been a very dear friend, and luckily, i can say that with her, i have spent the happiest times of my life. You will always be super special and The One for me. She is the one i wish to marry one day. Hey there Delilah- Plain White T'sHey there DelilahWhat's it like in New York City?I'm a thousand miles awayBut girl, tonight you look so prettyYes you doTimes Square can't shine as bright as youI swear it's trueHey there DelilahDon't you worry about the distanceI'm right there if you get lonelyGive this song another listenClose your eyesListen to my voice, it's my disguiseI'm by your sideOh it's what you do to meOh it's what you do to meOh it's what you do to meOh it's what you do to meWhat you do to meHey there DelilahI know times are getting hardBut just believe me, girlSomeday I'll pay the bills with this guitarWe'll have it goodWe'll have the life we knew we wouldMy word is goodHey there DelilahI've got so much left to sayIf every simple song I wrote to youWould take your breath awayI'd write it allEven more in love with me you'd fallWe'd have it allOh it's what you do to meOh it's what you do to meOh it's what you do to meOh it's what you do to meA thousand miles seems pretty farBut they've got planes and trains and carsI'd walk to you if I had no other wayOur friends would all make fun of usand we'll just laugh along because we knowThat none of them have felt this wayDelilah I can promise youThat by the time we get throughThe world will never ever be the sameAnd you're to blameHey there DelilahYou be good and don't you miss meTwo more years and you'll be done with school And I'll be making history like I doYou'll know it's all because of youWe can do whatever we want toHey there Delilah here's to youThis ones for youOh it's what you do to meOh it's what you do to meOh it's what you do to meOh it's what you do to meWhat you do to me.
Opinions on my lyrics for a song i wrote?
This is with an acoustic guitar, (capo on 4th and has G, D, Em and C - all of which are a variation to the original chord) ANYWAYS so this song is about losing some one close to you, i wrote it with the help of a friend and i had in mind my friend who had passed away due to a brain tumor, but in general about any one you love leaving you, just want some opinions and what ever <3 i will not let you fade away into a distant memory you will forever be in my heart we will never grow apart coz i love you and you love me that's the way its supposed to be -------------------------------------- i will not let you fade away into a distant memory torn in two when we were forced to part coz you and me are a piece of art i will remember everything that you said i will remember all the jokes that we shared --------------------------------------... i will not let you fade away into a distant memory now your gone, i have holes in my heart down in the deepest part of my soul i miss your love, your embrace i miss seeing your glowing face ------------------------------------- i will not let you fade away into a distant memory you told me its over, time to move on but you will remember forever long long walks along the beach, sneaking out late at night running all day and mucking around, time to go you hold me tight ---------------------------------- I will not let you fade away into a distant memory thanks <3
Good song about your girlfriend moving away for school?
My girlfriend Just moved to Australia for college for a year. We just broke up before she left but we still really like each other. I don't want to hold her back from enjoying her experience because of us holding on to each other when we are so far away, but I also want her to know that when she comes home i would love to get back together with here. Long distance relationships suck and put a huge strain on things. Even though we broke up it still feels like we are still together and I don't exactly know how to break it off without being an asshole because i still like her. I'm looking for a song along those lines like enjoy yourself experience the world, ill be here when you return. Any genre will be fine i listen to all kinds of music. Thanks for any song suggestions.
Are these good love song lyrics?
Oh, wow, I'm literally crying. This is beautiful, there is no way she won't love it!!! Wonderful job!!! You girlfriend is very lucky! :):):)