What do you think of these rap lyrics?
Your lyrics are very eloquent. Sounds as if you are battling with a toxic virus of "hate/rage" and are recovering with strong immunity against future infections. Interpersonal boundaries are very important to recognize in order to avoid infections of any vulnerable emotions within the self and/or others. Take care!
What do you think these lyrics mean?
"red, white, and pitch black, Colors I will not get back, 'Cause times change and colors too, Today I learned something new. Green, brown, purple haze, These colors do amaze, 'Cause times change and colors too, Now my favorite color's blue." The song is called Splitting Colors by Lemâitre. Maybe it's just nonsense but it might be a really deep metaphor, I can't tell.
What do you think these lyrics mean?
What do you think these lyrics mean? if i can't be beautiful, i'd rather just die. so self obsessed with my mascara and mistakes vanities like a funeral, and everyone's at my wake. before i run out of air, there's more makeup to apply all eyes stare into valium coloured skies i got a sweet tooth, and strawberry youth, you wanna be my licorice and misguided youth. and right now, i'll show you how i'm a beauty killer. rhinestone my eyes closed and please fix my hair. this concealer can't hide all my pink nightmares before i run out of air, there's more makeup to apply doll eyes stare into valium coloured skies i almost died, but it felt great faking perfection wasn't worth the wait. i may be easy, easy to hate but you're so ******* easy, easy to break i got a sweet tooth, and strawberry youth, you wanna be my licorice and misguided youth. and right now, i'll show you how i'm a beauty killer. i almost died, but it felt great. faking perfection wasn't worth the wait. i may be easy, easy to hate but you're so ******* easy, easy to break tell me your secrets, and i'll tell you my lies. everything is monotone in my dead eyes. if i can't be beautiful, i'd rather just die. i'm a beauty killer. gorgeous killer. hot pink killer. fierce killer
What do you think of these song lyrics I wrote?
I wrote song lyrics for a song I’m writing, the name of the song is “Melissa’s parents”. Here are the lyrics: Melissa cries, Melissa fights for her life, she’s on the way to psycho with her dad, Melissa smokes, and then she’s broke she’s got no way of conformity, Melissa fights with her mom over the night but the right thing to do is fly a kite, Melissa’s parents, working day and night they come home and pray for Melissa to be okay, Melissa chokes, when she’s smokes shes on her way to recovery. Melissa writes, that she’s shy but the teacher still makes her present in front of the class, Melissa’s bass, where she learned in class won’t do her any good in this awful world, so she’s curls in a ball and makes her little brother fall, Melissa’s fine but she’s nine so why are Melissa’s parents a canine?
What do you think of these lyrics i wrote?
This is a good start but it's not quite connecting with the listener. I feel slightly disconnected from your story. I get it but it doesn't mean anything to me. This could be that it's a little too direct. We need to write it so that it is a bit more interpretive. This makes it appeal to more people and allows people to find something personal in it even if it's not what you meant it to mean. But don't write it too vague as well. I might rephrase (just an idea):"My thoughts are nocturnalMy feelings stay inside."my thoughts/head dwells in the cold of night. my heart trapped insideif only you could feel like i feelwe'll be alrightMy head gives the listening something to relate too, thoughts is more abstract but using my head means thoughts. This is the same with heart, they can feel it as they can relate. It also has different meanings for everyone. Again you could feel, is a stronger connecting word. When you say everything will be alright what do you mean. I've used We'll be alright. So this person is saying I'm in this relationship and I'm keeping things hidden for this other person. If this other person could only know what I'm feeling our relationship won't suffer that much. This relates to a more universal experience and people can connect with it.Keep this in mind and listen to your favorite songs and other songs as well. I don't really like RnB but enjoyed Climax from Usher, look for those connecting words like "I'm on my knees" instead of saying I'm begging, knees you can kind of feel but begging is harder to connect with. Don't over use it and get the "feel" for where it's needed. Writing is a process like any other art, constantly refine it till it sounds great! Hope this helps. Keep working at it, you'll find your style and your writing voice!
Do you think these lyrics mean semen?
There's a Miley Cyrus song about sex, but then it says: "You make flowers grow under my bed" Does that mean he shoots his seed on the bed, and that's why flowers would grow under her bed?? I can't think of anything else that would imply lol
What do you think of these song lyrics I wrote?
I've been writing songs, this one is called "Forever Shining" here are the lyrics: Do you shine? do you bright? do you far? where you are? where's your mom? where's your dad? come on over here and listen to the fad, did your friend? did your dad? did your sister? back then in the old days we said don't don't don't do do that because shining is for kids who said that? lets all adventure on the next high way, do you shine? do you far tell me where you really are? i'm a car your on mars now we're far, let's laugh at time, laugh at grace from where we are so let's just shine.
Don't you think these are the dumbest lyrics ever?
No, I think the are good. The song is about how she overeacted to something that happen in her relationship with someone. "Cause I've been acting like sour milk all on the floor" The idea of crying over spilt milk "It's your fault you didn't shut the refrigerator" She is blaming him for spilling the milk. It's a good song. If you don't like it...what is a song you do like?