Spm English essay 2009. I'm not sure if I did a major mistake that could ruin my grade. Help!?
For my essay, I chose the question for "Write a story ended with "We said our goodbyes and went our separate ways." I ran out of ideas so I wrote about a girl who encountered her childhood imaginary friend,Jimmy in her bathroom one day. Turns out that she had some kinda mental problem and had made him up when her father left her and her mom when she was 4 years old.Her mother brought her to see a psychiatrist when she was eleven and she managed to lead a normal life till he suddenly appeared when she was 17. After that I wrote she realized it's time for her to grow up and she had no space for him in her life. The story ends with her rushing up the stairs determined to end her friendship with him with the sentence "We said our goodbyes and went our separate ways." Since I had no time, I just wrote what she said and his expression when she said that. Didnt give much description of characters though. I'm worried that the SPM examiner will refer to my idea as immature. Most people wrote about their friends. Didn't think of that... I'm also worry that it's not relevant to the last sentence. I didnt get a chance to edit my writing. Ran out of time :(
ENGLISH HELP!! Multiple Choice!!!?
17. Identify the best correction of the sentence fragment. Had studied and was ready for the exam. (Points : 3) The class had studied and was ready for the exam. 18. Identify the best correction of the clause fragment. When you get to the end of the block. (Points : 3) Delete “of the block.” Change “you” to “we.” Change “When” to “After.” Add “Turn” to the beginning of the fragment. 19. Identify the best correction of the clause fragment. Because the weather had turned suddenly cold. (Points : 3) Delete “Because." 20. Identify the best correction of the clause fragment. A day or two to discuss the matter thoroughly? (Points : 3) Add “Do you need” to the beginning of the fragment. 21. Which choice does not contain a run-on sentence? (Points : 3) The Big Dipper is almost always visible in the Northern Hemisphere, so these stars make a good reference point. 22. Which choice does not contain a run-on sentence? (Points : 3) By using the Big Dipper, you can find the North Star. Just follow an imaginary line through the Dipper’s two end stars. 23. Which choice best corrects the run-on sentence? The Big Dipper is a group of seven stars they belong to the constellation Ursa Major. (Points : 3) The Big Dipper is a group of seven stars; belonging to the constellation Ursa Major. The Big Dipper is a group of seven stars; these stars belong to the constellation Ursa Major. The Big Dipper is a group of seven stars. Belonging to the constellation Ursa Major. The Big Dipper is a group. The seven stars belonging to the constellation Ursa Major. 24. Which choice best corrects the run-on sentence? The Big Dipper is easily spotted it looks like a cup with a long handle. (Points : 3) The Big Dipper is easily spotted. It looks like a cup with a long handle. 25. Which choice best corrects the run-on sentence? The Big Dipper is known by other names in Britain it is called "The Plow." (Points : 3) The Big Dipper is known by other names; for example, in Britain it is called “The Plow."