Is this a well written paragraph (short paragraph)...?
I just finished writing the conclusion paragraph for my comparative essay (on family life in two books), and I wanted to know if it was well written. If you see any mistakes (tense issues, sentence structure, grammar, etc). Any help would be greatly appreciated (sorry I couldn't paste it here, Y!A said it wouldn't fit: Conclusion: http://www.flickr.com/photos/50779637@N02/4668338460/sizes/l/ -Thanks
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Is this paragraph well written or wrong?
i mean the vocabulary and the grammar ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,The funny thing about this existential turmoil of my seeking, is that even though the complexity of supreme meddling in the sort of taking personal interest in our destiny has been completely cast out and annulled; there remains the question of what's beyond... There settles always room for doubt, and always room for faith!
What can I write for a paragraph on Lent?
How about a paragraph on praticing honesty, giving up your free time, and doing your homework yourself? Isn't is something of a lie to ask others to do your homework for you?
Is this paragraph correct and readable?
No. It is not very readable. I paused to analyse whether my view of the paragraph was coloured by the umpteen highly similar questions you have already asked in this vein, in what I can only imagine is an attempt to get Quora to proof-read your novel, one paragraph at a time. On concluding this self-review, I am content that I have not allowed this fact to prejudice the assessment you have asked for. So, back to your question: I think "Part of the process involved using nitrogen to prevent oxidation of tin" is missing a "the" somewhere. Either before oxidation or tin. "He found that part poetical" - I'll come back to this."By being consumed, nitrogen rescued the situation. It was like a cop getting shot to save a victim". What situation? Who is the victim in this analogy? Tin? The windshield? "He found that part poetical" - the human heart can be lifted by many things and who am I to say that the oxidation of nitrogen is not one of them? I would venture however to respectfully submit that it wouldn't be the most common cause of such feelings...I personally find the metaphor very laboured and it makes the piece overall unwieldy and stilted.
Is the following paragraph grammatically correct and well written?
Paragraph writing remains one of the most important parts of writing. The paragraph serves as a container for each of the ideas of an essay or other piece of writing. Paragraphs are versatile and can take many forms that strengthen your writing, provide variety for readers, and help readers to organize the ideas you present. Every sentence in a paragraph must be grammatically correct, in so much as that grammar aids in understanding the ideas that the writer would like to convey. The topic sentence, in particular, must be very well written and very clear to readers. However, finding a proofreader is one of the final and most important steps to composing a great essay. Errors and inconsistencies in your essay will distract and confuse the reader, resulting in a less successful piece of writing.
Is the word "line" correct in this paragraph, and is the paragraph itself correct?
The word "line" is correct, but it is archaic . If you're writing period fiction (not current fiction), it's okay. Your paragraph is grammatically correct, but most editors would not put a comma after "phone" because there is no subject in the fragment "and didn't say anything."
Is the below linked paragraph well written?
The paragraph asked about is:Emily had never felt any maternal instinct, but had never thought of hurting a child. She still wouldn’t do it directly, but felt less inhibited to harm Holly’s mother than ever before. Compared to some men in the world, Michelle wasn’t so evil, but that, somehow made Emily want to harm her even more. Then she would be out of the way.It isn’t ringing my bell the way it’s written. It’s not horrible or anything, but if this crossed my desk to be edited I would change it up. My 1½ cents is:I do like the first sentence all right, but it wanders away from vivid description pretty quickly.Structurally it’s not too bad, though to be fair there appears to be enough of a shift in emphasis here to justify filling in more details into more than one paragraph.There are three buts and two harms, which is a couple too many. In my business qualified statements are the rule of the day, and we find ourselves using “however” and “but” and “although” entirely too much; we have to sometimes but there’s no reason to use more than one in this passage. In fact, try not to repeat words too closely in general unless it’s part of a comparison or a consistent turn of phrase that you’re emphasizing for artistic effect.I think the second sentence is entirely redundant. Leaving most of it out would allow for a bit of tension and mystery to develop when we come to the end. Also, you can imply the “harm”.If I were to rewrite it, (out of context) I’d try something like this:Emily had never before sought to hurt a child despite her lack of maternal instinct, and although she still wouldn’t do so directly, and Holly’s mother Michelle was hardly evil compared to some of the men in the world, somehow that made Emily want her out of the way that much more.
Are the contractions in this paragraph used correctly? Is the paragraph correct?
YOU'RE ALL WRONG! If you aspire to write, PLEASE LEARN TO STICK TO THE FIRST-STATED VERB TENSE! Your paragraph makes no sense.FOR EXAMPLE, your 2nd and 3rd sentences should've read:It would've made more sense if they'd done it together. If they'd both been in Buffalo, they'd've been certain that every aspect of the job had gone perfectly. . . .