Rate my rap 1-10 ....?
lol GZA influence written all over this. 8/10
Rate my 16 bars? (rap song)?
im writing a rap about my life, and i want to know if im starting it off correctly if its good according to you guys. like a little survey. rate: 1-10 lyrics: A young boy was born on august the second To his family this child was a valuable blessing little did anyone know the conflicts he was stressing he wouldn’t show it at the same time he wouldn’t neglect it He came to America at four years of age Because his father wanted him to be a person of fame he was enrolled in school which he attended everyday It was all fun and jokes a simple little game I don’t wanna go to school Is what he would say I rather stay home and chill with my toys all day So his mother would reply with, you better behave if I go to school tomorrow I don’t want complaints He was still a little boy what else would he say But he was scared of his home he learned this the hard way So he never stayed alone until one sudden day It was too much to cope it had all completely changed
Please rate my 16-bar rap verse/lyrics?
I just wrote these today for an audition for a local rap group in my town, and I wanted to know what you guys think. Rate on a 1-10 scale please It's like suicide when you try to mess with me Think you can beat the sick ol flow, go ahead I'll watch you fail with glee My rhymes go wicked hard like my boy Floyd Mayweather Hate on Windy City Kidz, you best not if you wantcho skull together Cause our time is now, we're ready to shine You already got yours, now I'ma get mine It's time to pass the torch, your days are up You gonna put up a fight, I knock you cold just for my warmup If you still don't get the message lemme put it like this Boy your rhymes are super weak, my raps are nothin but pure bliss Do you feel what i'm spittin, is it comin in clear Son I'm flashing my headlights and your nothing but a lost deer You know Kanye, you know Wayne, you know Nicki, you know Drake But the only thing that's wrong is that their **** is all fake That ain't the deal wit us, we spit nothin but real game, Now you feel the W.C.K., we're the outbreak that can't be contained
Rate my rap lyrics?
Verse #1 As I hear the beat drop, I think of something to say, whether it's me tryna be stopped, dont have much time, as the beat plays, I've been called a chump, a punk, and a *****, I front flipped, busting my tongue, and lip while risking of crushing my lung and hip, I'm like a monk, who took a hit to the rib, the adrenaline pumps, like I'm about to jump off a bridge most of them talk about commiting crimes in the music, the truth is, they never do it, the fame is a privilege, but they just abuse it, if you have the decision to stay alive or dead, just choose it hook: Willy, Willy MP, **** those, that go against me, (hook is not finished) Verse #2 I use a single song, to speak many stories, whichever is strong, whether short or long, I don't care for glory, I dont need to go to college, in order to get a certain kind of knowledge, whether, I'm liquid or solid, I could be forever abolished, you think you're clever, next thing you know, I'm astonished, Verse #3 this prophecy appeals, like democracy ideals, the hypocrisy is real, with the girl that thinks she can stop me, on how she made me feel, I'm not doing this for you, or for her, doing this so that the truth, can be heard, my feud with you, should be your main concern, you're not worth the fuel, that should be burned, screw it i dont gotta make it to the level of a wrecker, in order to break the world record, I make new enemies, with honest criticism, especially, when i diss em with some rhythm,
Rate My Rap Lyrics(1-10)?
I'm depressed, as my brain bangs" Hitting home, alone with aches and stress" Until My Head hangs" A pain infested, with cold flows" Spreading, through the same road of depression" A chain reaction of no's" Heading down death's row" a first question, left second guessing, with oh's" Back-stabbed, Shaq's back, has back stabs" By whack-jobs" God" That past, has passed" scratch , leaving behind vast scars" I'm trapped" Like a sap, attacking with raps, to adapt" As their life-guards" Giving CPR, while I'm spinning tracks, in form of torn bars" Quicker than, when spitting ten miles of yards" Splitting tapes to break" Back to scratching at their Cd-Roms" See me mom? I'm back in action" Lights camera rapping" I write, despite my funny bone snapping ah;s" Swinging moods, at a room full of snobs" Twisting their palms, cause I'm armed with a pen" as I being to twist their necks quicker than" twisting ten door knobs, kicking in" Paw's(pause) on the clocks, and still Shaquille" Is shifting chills" A thrill" Ticking off bombs, and still" Just alittle rap, here's verse one...Well, I'm about to make the chorus, the song is called" Day by day:, Well basically, should I continue it, yes or no, and also rate and comment. And please any advice if you think I need some. Thank you!
Rate my Rap lyrics 1-10?
I'm looking for a girl with inner beauty, It's not all about Perfect curves like a baseballer's pitch, As long as she Turns me on like a light switch, Like biggie says its just me and my *****, I'm looking for a girl who'll sit Under my arm, Walking in public her Palm in my palm, Hanging off my wrist like a pandora bracelet charm, Someone I can find gorgeous even without make up, pinch me see if I wake up, Cause being awake with her would be like a perfect dream, Its like inception, but there aint no leonardo, She's an exception, I'm looking for my Juliet I'll be Romeo, Just like Dicaprio, I'm looking for love like he found on that titanic boat, So I can write I love you like a Dear John note, And if I was running for election she's the type to vote, But don't wanna have to compete for affection like a Simon Cowell game show, I'm looking for a girl with the x factor like Leona Lewis, Fall in love.... Yeah I'm looking to do this,
Rate my diss rap so far 1-10?
Take out the bit about 'Siram', he's got nothing to do with this, he doesn't deserve that however, exceptional rap. End it at, "those big ears could be a perfect place to store your mail". The other bit ruins it. You should put your talent to better use, don't diss people they diss you. You should be making songs, not raps about people who don't deserve to be rapped about. You're better than that man.
Rate my rap i wrote 1-10 plz?
im 15 years old and i just want some feed back to see how i can improve my rap. I know i need to improve it a bit before i record it so i need advice. please rate it 1-10 i got 1 verse and the first part of my secound verse done. give me good feed back on what you think of the whole thing. verse 1: My rhymes shine so bright, you can see it in the dark/ every punch like thrown has its own spark/ I dont care about the money donni, i just wanna make my mark/ I ain't singed yet, cuz i just had a slow start/ If lifes like a U-turn, im turnin too sharp/ But im makin moves like mario in a go kart/ My lines go hard, make a hater hit the turf/ and im still going hard with a 32 bar verse/ if your scared now homie it will only get worse/ dont take this too personal cuz its only just words/ gettin a record deal is a race and im tryin to take first/ you see to me this rap thang is about the music/ you think moneys more importan than that?/ well then i think your stupid/ sometimes i just wish it wasn't connected in that sense/ all these beefs, violence, and damn pop trends/ all i got fro verse 2 is: All im saying is that its pretty degradin/ cuz you can't be considered the best unless you drive a mercedes/ and it be the same trash you here in each song/ so when i turn on the radio watch me switch the station/
Hey am 14 and I rap can you plz rate my lyrics from 1 through 10 and let me know what you think?
Mysteriously built like the pyramids not scared to scrap metal with the older kids grousemly killing beats the same way they slaughter pigs. These ****** fruity I break them apart quicker than the iPhone 6 if rap had positions I would be a major flow like water under a boat controlled by a sailor. not only are we dropping bombs we also leaven craters Life is very tricky the situations you might find tend to get very sticky you can't choose fate so it's foolish to be tricky. I ask my self over and over who do u wanna be am destined for greatness but like a kid with no glasses read a book it's hard to see I was never the kid to feel good about good will always silent like ya boy was chokin on a pill grew up in a small town filled with goons and people who's I him to kill red cape tied around his neck cause these bars hard as steel in reality I don't exist but I still keep it real
Rate my short Rap Lyrcs(1-10)?
Im so disgusted at the unadjected justice system/ Casue they are just adjusted with untrusted isms/ They lack trusted Wisdom and bust gats at Victims/ (Play on Word-busted) The public is sick of liberals hacking capitalism/ So Catapult them adults at the folks in the suits/ The Government is a told hoax-and the jokes on you/ (Deep Complex Meaning) Opinions? Just some short lines