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Wanting Another Opinion On My Naruto Oc

What is your opinion on my OC's name?

Here is a list of Japanese last nams: http://surnames.behindthename.com/names/...

Here are my favorites:
Fujioka ("near Mt. Fuji")
Hisakawa ("marketplace by the river")
Kita ("tree field")
Kobayashi ("small forest")
Matsuoka ("hill covered in pines")
Tachibana ("wild orange")
Yukimura ("snowy village")

Sora is a common name in animes, but there's a reason for it: it is a very nice name. I think it's good for you to branch out as an author and say you'd like to try something different, so good for you!

How do you like my Naruto OC fanfiction?

im sorry i stopped reading fanfiction after i realised about all the fans that want naruto and sasuke to ****

From your opinion, who's the real hero in Naruto?

Some people says, Naruto Uzumaki is the real hero, other acknowledge Itachi Uchiha as true hero. But for me it is very hard to tell who is. Of course, story concentrates on Naruto Uzumaki, an adolescent ninja who searches for recognition and dreams of becoming hokage. Though he had suffer much loneliness, he never given up on his dreams. It is true that he was the savior of whole shinobi worlds. On other hand, Itachi uchiha, who had been appear as an antagonist mad e a greater impact in shinobui world, its true he was treated as antagonist for much of series, but later it revealed Itachi slaughtered his clan in order to prevent a coup d'état which would result in a war, and that he had been acting in both Konoha's and Sasuke's best interests for the entire series. yeah, considering his actions he was a true shinobi, though he didn’t get much attention from shinobi world.I would like to say something about Fugaku uchiha, Itachi’s father, head of uchiha clan. He genuinely wanted to preserve peace in Konoha, going along with the relocation despite the Uchiha Clan's protests to not let the situation in Konoha worsen. He was also much more wise than his clan, willing to cooperate with the relocation if the village would quell their suspicions over time, but eventually lost his patience. Even after agreeing with his clan's desire for revolution, he expressed his dismay at going about it in a way that involved the bloodshed of civilians, hoping to end it quickly and with as little harm as possible. He even chose to keep his Mangekyo Sharingan a secret from his clan in fear that it would drive them to seek greater power through amoral means. Fugaku Uchiha was a great person as Itachi was. But no one realized that.In series, characters like, Negato Uzumaki, Orachimaru, Madara Uchiha, Obito Uchiha etc. were possessed by evil hands. Their view of perception to life was quit different. And situations made em sunk into darkness. But each of em got their own reasons for their action. Once we knew their story too, it will be very hard to tell who is hero or villain in this series. You can name Naruto, Itachi, Jiraya, Neji, Negato, kakashi or Orachimaru etc as “a hero”, if you want to. In fact all characters can treated as heroes or heroine. There are no villains in this anime. I think this concept make Naruto Anime differ from other series. That is why many folks loves it.Thanks for A2A

What is your opinion of Boruto surpassing Naruto?

It’s bound to happen. Remember Kakashi’s very-obviously-foreshadowing statement where he noted with great solemnity that students will one day surpass their own teachers?Yeah. That’s what this sequel is doing. It’s trying to make Boruto a different person from Naruto because he is and should be. Keep in mind that this is what Naruto could have been if he’d been raised in a family with a father who is a Hokage and a mother who is very much alive. I see no reason to dislike Boruto for his lack of a tragic past - the anime has way too much of that - and his inability to understand his father’s position. He’s sane, talented, unbroken, hot-headed yet smart, and quite stubborn. He is also a pillar of support for everyone he meets and carries on his father’s Talk-no-Jutsu legacy.Sure, he is no jinchuriki, lacks his father’s awesomeness and over-powering goodness while he beats someone to a bloody pulp in battle, but definitely through no fault of his own.And it makes complete sense that with a Konoha so advanced it looks like modern day Tokyo, the chakra utilization would be finer, smoother and more effective than before. As Boruto says, it’s not Naruto’s ‘lame era’ anymore (harsh blow, Uzumaki) and constant advances are being made. Boruto is already more talented and refined a shinobi than Naruto could have hoped to be at his age, that much is clear. He may not have the same reasons or even the same scale of passion that his father had for becoming so great, but he learns better and has enough of Naruto and Hinata’s blood running in his veins that he will do whatever it takes to achieve a goal. He learns new and advanced techniques that are very viable to appear as he grows older.In conclusion, there is nothing wrong with Boruto surpassing Naruto, it should have been expected by everyone, and the only thing I worry about is that as exciting as these new techniques will be, his father was already a planet-destroying monster, so what levels of chaos are he and his cute little friends capable of? Sarada, Shikadai, Chouchou, Inojin and Himawari frankly scare me with how big of a powerhouse they might turn out to be.

What's your opinion of man buns?

To answer the question: I think they can look very cool and it's a great way a guy can wear longer hair in something other than a pony tail ...which I think can be a good look too.Long hair on guys is popular again and is better accepted today ...accepted a lot more easily than it was when it was the style back in the 60's. And I think that's very cool. Quite frankly I'm kinda tired of the shaved head look on guys ...especially if you're not folically challenged. I call it the "Special Ops" look which seems to have an avid following. I guess some guys think they exude some aura of "toughness" because they look like a Seal, a Delta Force guy or a hired assassin. And I get that it's easy to take care of but it looks truly unflattering on most men.I've spent all of my adulthood ...from my mid twenties through the point I'm writing this ...in a job field that had and has strict regs on both facial and head hair length for men. I have always longed to grow my hair out and have a beard ...or even sport a "shadow" ...but could never do either. So I'm living vicariously through all you lucky guys who can. Maybe when I retire ...So screw what the naysayers bleat; if you can grow the asset then rock the man bun ...and the beard ...and the pony tail. Do it while you can ...

Is my Naruto OC a Mary Sue?

sure. An OC won't have the capacity to have a demon as effective because of the fact the kyuubi. There are basically 7 effective beasts locked interior human beings. I could say the pondered strategies factor is kinda cool...yet won't have the capacity to ensue. Its cool that shes interior the akatsuki, yet because of the fact she has 2 bfs does not advise shes a mary-sue. It ability shes a whorey mary-sue. i'm quite specific that interior the real manga Hidan and Diedara does no longer be comfortable with sharing a lady chum with eachother ._. you won't have the capacity to have a prolonged kinfolk more advantageous than the hyuuga prolonged kinfolk. they are the main effective in konoha. and he or she could desire to be the only one left, yet she might could think of a few sturdy back floor tale, in comparison to Sasuke's. idk approximately her prolonged kinfolk, yet an eye fixed justsu is okay, as lengthy as its no longer completely dramatic like hers... therapeutic with black chakra is cool, yet i doubt that its achieveable.. The devils daughter...? yeah ok. and faith is faith i assume, and its merely like real existence, you won't have the capacity to % it for somebody.... My answer could be, smack her interior the face, and specific. Her OC is between the feared Mary-Sue's.

Is My Naruto OC a Mary Sue?

It's impossible to really tell if this character is a Mary Sue from this information. The fact tha tyou are aware of the potential Sue pitfall is already a point in your favor.

Consider:
- Do all the good/intelligent/best characters approve of and support Mikazuki?
- Do all the bad/immoral characters dislike her? Are there lots of people jealous of her?
- Is morality in the fic divided along whether someone is for or against her?
- Does she never make mistakes?
- Does she make mistakes that never result in actual negative consequences?
- Are these negative consequences completely excused because of her bad past?
- Do you go out of your way to include scenes where she shows off her superior abilities, intelligence, morality, coolness, etc. when it is not relevant to the plot?
- Do you spend more time than is necessary describing her attractiveness, coolness, strength, etc.?
- Do you, personally, consider her to be superior to many other character in the Naruto universe?
- Is her sarcastic and cruel behavior excused because of emotional wounds?
- Is needlessly meanness from her portrayed as 'cool' and 'tough'?
- Are those who dislike her because of her personality portrayed as being 'shallow' for not giving her unconditional support and affection, or not 'trying to understand her'?
- Do a bunch of guys fall head over heels for her because she is just that amazing?
- Is she 'not like other girls'?
- Do her negative personality traits immediately disappear the moment they might actually result in her doing something problematic?
- Do the lives of almost every character in the fic revolve around her?

The more of those questions you answered yes to, the more likely it is that she is a Mary Sue.

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