Which one of these sentences is correct?
Grammatically speaking, both are correct.The first one is in direct speech and should be punctuated accordingly."How could I have forgotten about that?", he thought. It was the most important detail of the mission. Something that a soldier of his caliber had to remember.The second one is supposedly in indirect speech. It needs a few rearrangements.How he could have forgotten about that, he thought. It was the most important detail of the mission. Something that a soldier of his caliber had to remember.I don't know what you mean by just. But if you are narrating the story using dialogues, the first one would be better. Nonetheless, the first one seems to be an appropriate and clear grammatical construct.
In this sentence which one is correct: STARS' or STAR'S ???
"(...)And, of course, the biggest contributor to the spread of the American culture: the STARS'/STAR'S glamour, which makes every mortal on Earth dream of eternal happiness and beauty.(...)" If possible try to explain why and if you find another mistake feel free to tell me about it! Thank you.