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Which sentence is correct, “I didn't make mistake” or “I have not made mistake”?

Neither is correct.If you are answering a query regarding a specific mistake, you should say:I didn’t make the/this/that mistake.This mistake isn’t mine.I didn’t make the /any mistake.

Help me find the ten mistake on the verb tense.?

It have 10 mistake on it. Please help me fix to the correct verb. Some errors, may need to have both the helping verb and the main verb.

I usually am flying economy class, but last year I flied first-class on a trip from Vermont to Texas. This is how it happened. When I arriving at the airport, the attendant told me the airline had overbooked, which meant they were selling too many tickets for that flight. I were not in a hurry, so I offered to go on the next flight. Then I found out there were an extra seat after all--it was first class! As I sat in my first-class seat, I notice the ride was much quieter and smoother than in other parts of the plane. When I buzzed the flight attendants, they are arriving right away. Also, there was enough fleece blankets for everyone, so I was able to cover myself when the cabin got too cool. Because the seats were so large, I had lots of room to stretch my legs. Best of all, the first-class meal was really good. All of these pleasant surprises made the flight seem shorter than any other flight I have took before.

Is tis ok? Are there grammar mistakes?

There are a couple of mistakes. There are some places where you need commas, and where it makes more sense to switch the dependent and independent clauses. You also switched tenses several times.

Just fyi: when writing about literature, the precedent is to write in the present tense, so that's what I changed it to.



Matt, a 12 year old boy, and his father finish building a cozy, comfortable cabin for their family in the wilderness, as Matt’s father has to leave to bring the rest of their family to this new settlement. Matt must tries to survive in the wilderness alone, until the day his father returns. However, he is attacked by angry bees. As a result, he is swollen and hurt. Fortunately, he is rescued by an Indian chief and his grandson, Attean.

When Matt feels better, the Indian chief tells Matt to teach Attean English. In return, Attean will hunt rabbits and birds for Matt. As Attean learns how to speak English and Matt becomes a skilled hunter, Attean and Matt begin to get to know each other. Months pass and there is still no sign of Matt’s family. Later on, Attean and his grandfather ask Matt to join the Beaver tribe and move north. Will Matt go or stay and wait for his family to return?

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