Is my poem good or bad? What can I fix?
You're off to a good start! =0)
Are these poems good or bad?
OMG, did you created those poems?It's really superb o-obMy Friend, My FriendThe Witch Tutor I like the first one though, the second one reminds me of a movie :3
Is my poem good or bad?
Faaaabulous. You should get it published.
What makes a poem good or bad?
Obviously, anyone's personal enjoyment from a poem is a highly subjective question. However, there are some common features of poems that are considered by critics to be "great." These include how the poem grapples the philosophical questions of the age, how the poem adheres (or not) to established poetic forms, and how clever the poem is in its use literary devices such as irony, metaphor, and allusions (to historical events, other poems, etc.). But none of these factors truly encapsulates the overall holistic impact of a great poem. Poetry is, above all, an art form. Perhaps the most important quality of all is a strong and distinctive voice, that can conjure a brand new world. The piercing brilliance of Keats. The studious discipline of Tennyson. The manic visions of Yeats. The burnt-out existential despair of T.S. Eliot. The roguish playfulness of e.e. cummings. The cosmos of Shakespeare.
What separates a good poem from a bad one?
Poetry is the essence of the words, the meter, the flow, the breaks -- it is a combination of how your senses perceive the poem as much as it is what you have written. I have looked at many poems here lately, and they crash and are filled with rage. I don't read the rest of the poem because I am not filled with rage, and I would rather flow with words like I was drifting on a leaf across a puddle. But that is my mood now, and that is why I do not answer these poems. If you visualize, then you are better at critiquing than you think! Visualize what his poem says -- does it reach you? if not, why not? Try this. And, as in any good work, show don't tell.
Is my free verse poem good or bad?
I just wrote a free verse poem for fun, I am not good at poetry so any help to improve my poem would be appreciated. Fear Fear controls you like the strings attached to a puppet. Fear controls a mind like a remote control controls a TV. Fear controls those who have loss control. Fear controls a menace to society. Fear controls the illogical decisions made by logical people. Fear controls an isolated kid that exists but does not live. Fear controls anxious men & women who suffer alone. Fear controls a depressed person who fakes their smile. Fear controls are families. Are friends And Are neighbors Fear controls life. But fear will not control my life. Because I will control fear. Please give an honest opinion on my poem.
How good/bad is this poem (ghazal)?
Thanks for your effort.Your thoughts are really good and you’ve penned them good as well. But except the thoughts,Urdu poetry has some poetry aspects too such as“Radiif”“Kaafiya”“Matlaa”“Maqtaa” and most important“Behar”.You done well with performing “Radiif” and “Kaafiya” but a ghazal should follow the same behar in each and every sher. That’s the only missing part.Learn it from here:What is Ghazal? (Aspects, Technicalities, Rules & Terms) | Aashnai e Shayrihttps://www.scribd.com/document/...The Technical Aspects,Terms And Rules of Ghazal Writing.....Hope you take it posistively.P.S.: You can also PM me to learn more.
A good poem about a bad neighborhood ?
Bad Neighborhood Walking is better than slavering death Seven sad minutes, composited breath Empty chambers looking down in distress Hurry up and get dressed! The night and the Bourbon Are cutting the chill If fear were a beer I'd be gorging my fill When Sun hits the rooftops I'll be happier still They've eaten their fill (I'm home, Honey) http://allpoetry.com/poem/6142045-Bad_Ne... Another poem: http://poetrypoem.com/cgi-bin/index.pl?p...
Does this poem sound good?
- Regarding the poem's sound, the rhymes work, and it's got an almost musical rhythem and flow. Though, considering how dark and angry the content is, it's almost imporssible for me to read this and not hear a death-metal/screamo sound in my head. (honestly, I'm hearing Papa Roach's "Last Resort" as I read this - and I should add, I don't really like that sound.) - There area few rhymes here I like. "hours/sour" is good. "bones/groans" also workd well. -Grammatically, there are issues here. Commas would help. Also, I think you mean "we're" in line 4, and "fill" in 7. -I also find the "we" in line one distracting. I'd just change it to "me" to keep the rhyme and make the speaker own this poem. It's so rage-filled and emotional, I think a personal speaker would fit. -the turn at the end is interesting, especially the penultimate line. It's probably the key to the poem, so good there.